Marvel: A New Avenger

Hayz its one of those fanboying mc . . . D D Dd D D D F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F Fff F F F F F G G Fudidiwiwjwjshdfi8fididisiwiw9widi

Improved so far. The Cringeness could be tuned down a bit then it would be Great. Make the MC have his own personality and don't make him become a Try Hard Deadpool or Spiderman.

Very slow progress for a system user especially in the marvel universe, not to mention the author seems to be a little lazy when updating the mc's skills {the skills show the exact same info at lvl 3 as they did at lvl 1}

Mc is stupid and naive. does he not know the risk of involving himself with shield, the shield is full of hydra lol. He was easy to be manipulated by Fury.

This fanfic is recommended to me by my friend. Did Tony Stark transmigrated into Alex Krown? Or is Alex Krown the mc that discovered an usual game that would transmigrated him into the marvel universe? Anyway, the first two chapter were very enjoyable to read. not a huge marvel fan though. Don't drop this, Keep going!😁

This fanfic had such potential, it's a shame the author insists on nerfing his MC... The general idea at the beginning was very good and appealing however as the story progressed it became clear. The author too seemed to insist on doing boring stuff and uninteresting fights.. So I couldn't force myself to read past chapter 50 and just dropped it, maybe if the author decides to write another book fanfic of marvel I hope you can do it better.

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The mc is way too cringe or its just the story that makes him look cringe but either way Im dropping this, clown mc is ain't my cup of tea................

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I really like this novel it feels like the mc is an actual person rather then a super op mc who just got teleporting and all ready knows how to fight and does not feel pain he slowly works himself up to the level of superheros like ironman and captain america.

the protagonist is too weak. I'm only in chapter 24 but I understand that it's not worth continuing. The protagonist is pitiful and the system is useless. I understand that you want to give the protagonist a sense of danger but to make him almost lose a battle against mobs is exaggerated.

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first of all everyone is racist or against a stereotype by nature. don't believe me? for example IF, I repeat IF ...If the MC is set as a pedophile/communist then people who dislike the idea of a pedophile MC will have a hard time reading the writing. So this type of writing will limit the range of audience who can read your story. like me I am really against putting a certain race/country as MC's background. It really hurts me to imagine a hero/villain that wobbles his head as means of communicating because this is almost a fact as 99% of Indians do that as it is their culture. When you as a writer decide to use a certain race/country that has a stereotype you must understand that 'stereotype' exist and how it can effect the reader's experience. Just imagine if the MC is transmigrate to bollywood universe and he is a half-vietnamese , where his father is indian but his Vietnamese mother is set as a control freak with traditions. I highly doubt that it will attract any in indian readers because of the difference in culture.

Unlike many people, I liked mc's attitude overall, it's much better to be hero and good person than villain. But story became worse as it went on for other reasons. Basically this story just becomes another "system provides" story, he doesn't need to go on adventures, or use his knowledge or actions to get stronger, he just needs to use system. And secondly he doesn't use his marvel and future knowledge, he just goes with the flow without much agency. For example, he could pick some popular services/apps or whatnot from today and start an business to earn potentially billions, since he knows what would work. And secondly he could proactively look for superpowers like magic from Kamar-Taj or chi. And he could try to prevent disasters by providing information and warning to relevant people. Overall, mc just uses system, and goes to so disaster when it happens. That's pretty much it. Very boring, very lazy.