This Time I'll be Sweeter

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Author: Enebekesi
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"For this birthday, I wish to receive a special gift from someone."

Kenneth whispered under his breath. However, it was still loud enough for Elise to hear. When he blew his candle and opened his eyes again, he saw that his girlfriend's face had taken the shade of deep red.

But who would not?!!

Elise knew more than anyone what did he mean by that 'special gift'. With her cheeks still flushed, the girl handed him the gift that she prepared beforehand. But it was no ordinary gift, it was the newest model released by Rolex!

Kenneth scowled upon the sight of the watch. There was no doubt that the watch cost a fortune and there was no way he could accept such an expensive gift from the other party.

Yet before he could even say a word, Elise already sealed his lips with a kiss. Of course, the guy answered back with the same passion.

"Kenneth, wait... There's more."

Elise murmured while looking straight into Kenneth's eyes.

"There's more?!"

The other party asked back without tearing his eyes away from Elise's lips that were ripe from kissing. Elise on the other hand moved away from him and deliberately let the strap of her spaghetti top fell on her shoulder.

"Me....."

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Ethel_Imaginations
Ethel_Imaginations

Good start. The pacing, grammers and paragraph length is excellent. Continue writing at the same pace and it will definitely be engaging. There aren't any mistakes to be found honestly. Looking forward for more chaps. ❤️ ❤️

3 years ago
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Boani
Boani

The start is promising. The English is simple and very comprehensive. The character outline is perfect. Continue like this and your novel would be top notch. Keep it up author.

3 years ago
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Soleil_Lynx
Soleil_Lynx

Great title! The main idea is very interesting. I love the plot and the unique story line. There is no grammar and stylistic errors. I wish you more ideas!

3 years ago
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Professor_slaroM
Professor_slaroM

Wow! The storyline of Kenneth and Elise just pulls me in! Looking forward to the more chapters that are to come! Good luck in the WPC author san!

3 years ago
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KayLillyt_1
KayLillyt_1

A sweet romance story filled with heart break, and the need for a second chance. It is all very heart warming and the characters are intriguing. Their emotions tug on the readers’ heart strings even as it guides the readers through. A beautiful title and a beautiful read.

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