TENSURA: That Time I Abandoned Humanity

that time i rejected humanity.. and became monke. .

the MC is Nerf I thought you was going to be op .

I am shameless, And I am proud. .. ... .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. ... . .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .

The english needs some work with the grammar and some vocabulary. The story concept is interesting but sadly the mc follows naruto around and doesnt have a lot of influence on whats happening. He appears to be watching the show in the world itself and is childish and annoying while at it. The world is slightly au

I hate you author i though this was goin to be a good tensura fanfiction but no you just had to send him to Naruto like why what was the point in doing that you should honestly stop writing dropthis book and make an actual Tensura fanfiction

The story idea itself is good and all but the grammar and the way in which the author is doing this fic makes it seem rushed and not well thought out.

Reveal Spoiler

A DOOR IS HE WHO BLOCKS YOUR WAY, OR WELCOME YOU. AND HE, SHALL KNOW, NO SHAME. 。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。

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I have not read it so I will just give it 3 starts not bad nor good, what turned me off was the genderbend like I don't understand why do many authors like to have weirdos as Mc's? I personally only read male Mc but I would rather females then se freak jumping between genders, choose a gender and stick with it 🤷

Really good gamer elements and Story development. Full Story in Wattpad under the name ,,A Demon in a Ninjaworld" by Chair-kun(The same guy as Door-kun).

Well in the first volume the mc goes to the naruto world and became Naruto's older brother? I didn't understand that part and just skipped it bc the story seemed interesting so I continued and guess what? The mc starts doing things that doesn't make sense like a sudden change in personality after a time skip that just introduced new interactions with previously mentioned characters but it's still unknown why they changed their way of treating the mc like it wasn't mentioned(if it was I didn't read it or just forgot) and the mc just gets nerfed for no reason and it was just explained but it made no sense (like a great deal of things that happen with the ppl around the mc) when the mc went to the Tensura world it actually became good the mc is lazy and all there is romance and I can't point out anything bad about this volume actually the story becomes good just after this point but I stopped reading bc well the mc goes back to naruto which is bad and after that idk he goes back to Tensura but I'm not reading that volume too taxing on me

great great great ff, at the beginning it was (a bit) 'meh' but going further the quality increased significantly, i dont particularly like some of the plot stuff, that is not because of the ff, the author or anything else of the story though, its a personal preference of me just liking people getting messed with and chaos in generel and while that happens quite much and i really like that there was an ark where there really wasnt much of that. i liked the ending as well though how the ending came to... lets say if i were to choose someone as my entertainment i would be watching them from the end to the beginning even if it took megaannum(a million year)(or way more), as i said, that doesnt make it any less of a great ff but is just a personal preference of mine. PS: i hope i managed to avoid any real spoilers

I rly Loved IT and cant wait vor more. I prefer the parts in the Naruto world but ist Overall Well written. Thanks for such a nice story. The Plot about Naruto was fun top read and i Hope for some more Charakter development and how the great shinboi war will end. What will Happen about Naruto s Relations. Is it neji or Hinatha for example who felt in Love with Naruco?