New fanfic so I must follow the tradition of giving myself the shameless author review. I hope you enjoy the fanfic though..................
3 years ago
9
ManasCiel
Worth a read! A try atleast! So go read it!
2 years ago
6
LuciusAgares
This fanfiction is honestly the best fanfiction i have ever read, and I have read thousands. Asces writing quality is near perfection.
The main character is compelling and genius feels like a real guy, not some oc or si overpowered character who loves his Pokémon. The side characters are great and feel very dimensional.
Romance, while not a big part of this fic, feels very natural. Ash is actually mature, and the villan feels much more compelling and scary then the anime or games.
Story development is perfect. It isn’t too fast, not slow and hard to read. It just flows.
While background and setting isn’t a huge part of the fanfic, author-kun gives a great idea of where we are as readers are at all time.
Fight scenes are perfection and the main reason I love this fic. They are so well thought and I can tell the author really gave their all in every aspect in new and unique ways, showing their creativity.
My main fault of this fic is that it has slow updates, but I understand way, Asce has college to pay more attention to and therefore I will stand by and wait.
Thank you so much for your dedication, and giving us this great fanfiction.
a year ago
3
Isaiah_1217
The title and description along with how powerful the OC is and how cocky and confident as well calm he is especially when battling the Santalune gym leader not to mention was quite interested and intrigued by how the gym leader used her actual team of strong pokemon against him more so how he can talk telepathically to his pokemon not to mention he is known as The Trickster as well his reaction to Alain and how he figured out Alain as to why he asked for the book and also that he knows someone that has the other one but also how he left Alain questioning if he could even beat him if they were to battle
3 years ago
3
Daoist007877
do you have a love intrest or is he going to have a harem................................................................................................
3 years ago
2
0braincellsnadream
One of the best fanfics I’ve read in a long time. The updates were slow, but have picked up recently, and author is busy so it makes sense. Not much I can say that other reviews haven’t said already, but it’s clear the author is a huge pokemon fan, pays attention to minor details, writes lore where the canon doesn’t have it, and actually cares about telling a good and compelling story. The MC, despite using ghost types only, isn’t a chunnibyou or edgelord. He does have some emotional baggage, but he doesn’t play villain, or kill/hurt people for no reason. The two minor flaws I can think of are grammar mistakes, and a cringey nickname for the MC which I won’t spoil. The only major flaw is the power scaling (MC is weaker than he logically should be), but I also won’t go into too much detail on that to avoid spoilers. Overall, I’d definitely recommend this book to anyone who likes pokemon. Great read so far. Keep up the good work!
3 months ago
1
Fajar_Coker
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4 months ago
0
Nirv_dp98
best of the best.................wonderful
5 months ago
0
balthazar_lee
I really like this fic. The characters have some good personalities, and I especially like the characterization of the main character. I like how the author does the pokemon battles. The only thing I don't really like about the story is how often the chapters are updated. Other than that it's great.
8 months ago
0
MKKcalb
Man, this story is perfect, very good, keep up the good work, I love the interaction between the protagonist's pokemons, I hope to learn more about his past, at the same time that the development of his new relationship with Valerie flourishes and this floette pokemon is the resurrected pokemon from az, right? Will Az fight the protagonist instead of Ash so many questions my excitement only increases I hope you continue the story until the end without giving up or abandoning as that would be a huge loss
8 months ago
0
Dracmon13
Mc is extremely pathetic, he could stop the operation of the definitive weapon, stronger than the gym leaders, and has an absurd drama about the evil mega stone, etc., along with some very idiotic characters
9 months ago
0
Karma_Arc
a rare fanfic following with exact current timeline
a year ago
0
Maverick007
I love this book the only reason I did not. give 5 stars is because the updates are very slow but I love this story. also I have a qestion on about how powerful is atsume can he beat champions like Cynthia, lance or world champ like Leon?
2 years ago
0
Isaiah_1217
Definitely quite interesting and intriguing while reading this chapter of the battle between Astumu not sure if spelled right and Grant was little bit surprising since he couldn't focus right under pressure not to mention the battle against Ash definitely got me more intrigued but also the new evolution of Eevee with it being a Ghost Type evolution wonder what will happen next between the OC and his next gym battle as well if he will run into Team Flare look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
3 years ago
0
Isaiah_1217
Definitely quite interesting and intriguing the battle between Ash and The Trickster wonder what will happen next between them as well also what kind of battle The Trickster will face against Korine not sure if spelled it right look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
New fanfic so I must follow the tradition of giving myself the shameless author review. I hope you enjoy the fanfic though..................
Worth a read! A try atleast! So go read it!
This fanfiction is honestly the best fanfiction i have ever read, and I have read thousands. Asces writing quality is near perfection. The main character is compelling and genius feels like a real guy, not some oc or si overpowered character who loves his Pokémon. The side characters are great and feel very dimensional. Romance, while not a big part of this fic, feels very natural. Ash is actually mature, and the villan feels much more compelling and scary then the anime or games. Story development is perfect. It isn’t too fast, not slow and hard to read. It just flows. While background and setting isn’t a huge part of the fanfic, author-kun gives a great idea of where we are as readers are at all time. Fight scenes are perfection and the main reason I love this fic. They are so well thought and I can tell the author really gave their all in every aspect in new and unique ways, showing their creativity. My main fault of this fic is that it has slow updates, but I understand way, Asce has college to pay more attention to and therefore I will stand by and wait. Thank you so much for your dedication, and giving us this great fanfiction.
The title and description along with how powerful the OC is and how cocky and confident as well calm he is especially when battling the Santalune gym leader not to mention was quite interested and intrigued by how the gym leader used her actual team of strong pokemon against him more so how he can talk telepathically to his pokemon not to mention he is known as The Trickster as well his reaction to Alain and how he figured out Alain as to why he asked for the book and also that he knows someone that has the other one but also how he left Alain questioning if he could even beat him if they were to battle
do you have a love intrest or is he going to have a harem................................................................................................
One of the best fanfics I’ve read in a long time. The updates were slow, but have picked up recently, and author is busy so it makes sense. Not much I can say that other reviews haven’t said already, but it’s clear the author is a huge pokemon fan, pays attention to minor details, writes lore where the canon doesn’t have it, and actually cares about telling a good and compelling story. The MC, despite using ghost types only, isn’t a chunnibyou or edgelord. He does have some emotional baggage, but he doesn’t play villain, or kill/hurt people for no reason. The two minor flaws I can think of are grammar mistakes, and a cringey nickname for the MC which I won’t spoil. The only major flaw is the power scaling (MC is weaker than he logically should be), but I also won’t go into too much detail on that to avoid spoilers. Overall, I’d definitely recommend this book to anyone who likes pokemon. Great read so far. Keep up the good work!
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best of the best.................wonderful
I really like this fic. The characters have some good personalities, and I especially like the characterization of the main character. I like how the author does the pokemon battles. The only thing I don't really like about the story is how often the chapters are updated. Other than that it's great.
Man, this story is perfect, very good, keep up the good work, I love the interaction between the protagonist's pokemons, I hope to learn more about his past, at the same time that the development of his new relationship with Valerie flourishes and this floette pokemon is the resurrected pokemon from az, right? Will Az fight the protagonist instead of Ash so many questions my excitement only increases I hope you continue the story until the end without giving up or abandoning as that would be a huge loss
Mc is extremely pathetic, he could stop the operation of the definitive weapon, stronger than the gym leaders, and has an absurd drama about the evil mega stone, etc., along with some very idiotic characters
a rare fanfic following with exact current timeline
I love this book the only reason I did not. give 5 stars is because the updates are very slow but I love this story. also I have a qestion on about how powerful is atsume can he beat champions like Cynthia, lance or world champ like Leon?
Definitely quite interesting and intriguing while reading this chapter of the battle between Astumu not sure if spelled right and Grant was little bit surprising since he couldn't focus right under pressure not to mention the battle against Ash definitely got me more intrigued but also the new evolution of Eevee with it being a Ghost Type evolution wonder what will happen next between the OC and his next gym battle as well if he will run into Team Flare look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
Definitely quite interesting and intriguing the battle between Ash and The Trickster wonder what will happen next between them as well also what kind of battle The Trickster will face against Korine not sure if spelled it right look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book