Mate to the Heartless Alpha

Mate to the Heartless Alpha

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Author: Clix_Erika_D
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On a night so beautiful and calm, to the extent it was almost suspicious. A lady walked through a garden, it was called the garden of death due to the amount of bodies beneath it but all she could see was beauty and excellence.

She was adorned in exquisite scarlet garment, embodying timeless elegance, she took slow steps as her mind was heavy with thoughts.

'The Red moon is coming soon' she thought and sighed. For others this was a time to rejoice, as the new Alpha would be crowned. Her mate would become ruler.

She was to be brimming with excitement but her face was pale and she looked rather lost. Because for her this was the time she would be separated from her mate. She knew the ritual wouldn't be a success, she cursed the gods for giving her this power and the ability to see the future, which never failed to bring her sadness over and over.

'Lui Feng, I promise to return so please hold on', she thought tears filling her eyes. Lui Feng would do well without her, at least she hoped he would.

He didn't.

He grew colder and colder everyday after her death, much colder than he was before he met. Now she had been reincarnated, would she be able to melt his cold heart and face the many tribulations ahead as another moon wad coming?

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Overall this novel has great potential and I can’t wait to see where it leads! But, there are a few things I would like to point out that could help the author in their endeavours. For one, it feels as though we need more explanation as to who these people are, why these things are happening and where they live. The paragraphs are in need of a little extra spacing and some additional punctuation. Besides that this a great read and author has done an excellent job of bring it to life. ❤️😁👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻⭐️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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