Crystal_Cat

Hachiro transmigrated into the world of Shinobi, better known as Naruto.

He's reborn in the Raiden clan located in Kumogakure as the cousin of the Fourth Raikage.

As the 'darkness' of Konoha fights each itself, he cheers on as the Third Hokage and Danzo, slowly kill Konoha from the inside out.

Making use of his Lightning God system, he makes a name for himself in the Third Ninja War, and is gradually acknowledged as the ninja with the strongest lightning style!

After snatching Hinata Hyuga, he adopts her as his daughter and proudly shows her off to the rest of the world.

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I ended up sticking to the MTL quite heavily for the first 20 chapters, it's harder to actually tell it's a translation after that.

This is an edited version of machine translation, just making it clear.
MTL- https://mtlnation.com/novel/im-in-cloud-shinobi-village-grab-hyuga-hinata-at-the-start/

ps: I don't think I will edit past the Naruto arc (Chapter 200 or so), but I'll try to post two chapters a day.

In Kumogakure after adopting Hinata Hyuga.

Hiruzen noticed what she wanted to do and yelled, "Enma! Shrink quickly!"


The stick became shorter causing the attraction force to weaken tremendously.


However, last minute, Hinata, decreased the number of fingers, "Three Finger Hell Stab!"


The power of the thrust increased by a fold and she dashed out at a speed, faster than Hiruzen.


A group of catching up Anbu, exclaimed as they rushed over.


Mirrors made of crystal-like ice formed around them in the shape of a dome.


A cold and feminine voice echoed in their ears.


"I would advise you to worry for yourself."


Inside the many mirrors, reflections of Haku were present. He softly muttered, "


Standing in the ice mirror, countless white reflections faintly spoke:


Sweat poured down, Hinata as she grimaced in pain from smashing her hand into the black staff.


She slide back slightly before gathering lightning chakra into her hand again but with one less finger.


Despite this being the first time, she used the next level of Hell stab, she felt that she was ready for it.


After getting the Tenseigan, her perception, chakra control and physical strength had all increased exponentially


And in a way, this was the first time in history someone had ever used the Hell stab technique with such proficiency.


She used her eyes to pull the staff closer before grabbing onto it with her hand and chopping downwards with her hand.


Cracks spread as she gradually cut through the summon.


Hiruzen noticed the cutting power she demonstrated and unsummoned Enma, sending him back to his monkey habitat.


Inside the sudden emergence of smoke, Hinata twisted her hand used her momentum to slash towards the old Hokage.


With a lunge, she drew his blood and looked at him parallel from the ground.


A thick wound lay on his side, the old man's wrinkled face merely changed slightly as he substituted out of the way of her next swipe.


He reappeared, ignoring his wound and making hand movements faster than the flash.


A river of flames instantly ingulfed and swallowed her.


Hiruzen hopped on top of a nearby building, and made sure several logs were nearby, in case he need to substitute.


He looked back down at the thin smoke as a lightning covered Hinata leapt towards him with just as much determination as before.


Like he planned, he made the seals necessary to switch positions with the log, but neglected to notice a stray kunai thrown by one of the shinobi from below.


The old man twitched in pain as the kunai dug deep into his thigh, thankfully, he managed to gain some distance with the substitution.


Jiraiya rolled his eyes and joked with his opponent.


"Hey, look the old man is loosing his touch."


"Heh~ It's normal if you haven't fought in years, a machine would turn rusty with how long he's been inactive."


The arm's of the snake personification turned into many smaller snakes.


Jiraiya whistled and dived to the side preparing another wind jutsu.


"Can you stop with the snakes already? I'm going to have nightmares being bitten by them with every step I take!"


Right now, Orochimaru had the hand because Jiraiya hadn't gotten the time to enter Sage Mode.


The snake intended to keep it that way, as such the pressure was high.


Hiruzen jumped around and kept abusing simple techniques to avoid close combat.


He eyed her as she suddenly decided to switch to longer ranged techniques, then he had an idea.


Sorry for the short chapter, I might be occupied for the rest of the day so I thought I may as well post what I had.


Chapter 106: Not very smart Hokage?