In Kumogakure after adopting Hinata Hyuga.
Hachiro transmigrated into the world of Shinobi, better known as Naruto.
He's reborn in the Raiden clan located in Kumogakure as the cousin of the Fourth Raikage.
As the 'darkness' of Konoha fights each itself, he cheers on as the Third Hokage and Danzo, slowly kill Konoha from the inside out.
Making use of his Lightning God system, he makes a name for himself in the Third Ninja War, and is gradually acknowledged as the ninja with the strongest lightning style!
After snatching Hinata Hyuga, he adopts her as his daughter and proudly shows her off to the rest of the world.
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I ended up sticking to the MTL quite heavily for the first 20 chapters, it's harder to actually tell it's a translation after that.
This is an edited version of machine translation, just making it clear.
MTL- https://mtlnation.com/novel/im-in-cloud-shinobi-village-grab-hyuga-hinata-at-the-start/
ps: I don't think I will edit past the Naruto arc (Chapter 200 or so), but I'll try to post two chapters a day.
I give this a good 5/5 Because this man... my mans here sacrificed his braincells to translate this like a non chinese fanfic and he also had to delete alot of chinese reference that don't make sense. This one is a trooper boys.
The synopsis makes it sound like he’s gonna groom her or something. Pls tell me im wrong 😑 Xxxxxxxxxxxxxccccccc
Just kidnapped a child, feeling good. =-=-=-=-=-==--=-=-=-=-=-=--=-=-========-=========-------------
una version nueva de un fanfiction naruto, espero como lo desarrollas, muy bueno hasta ahora, esperando por mas, mas, mas, mas, mas, mas, mas, mas, mas, mas
I seriously don't even understand why he even took hinata dont she know eventually and also if I were him instead taking this insident into account I would rather smuggle both hyuga and uchiha clan also there was otsuki clan if he stop the plot then what about sealing kaguya
I dont like it I just . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
this translation is great .keep up the good work 😃 t[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Nice, Finally found a good translation HINATA !!!!!! 😌
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at first I was sceptical by the title , i thought another op mc who wants to make hinata his wife at age of 2-3 but I was wrong it's pretty good story
Well, it seems like the author tried hard to improve the writing quality and translation. I can barely see the the traces of mtl but there are still some rather glaring problems that can easily be fixed. Some mtl terms that are directly translated like how "Konoha" translated into "The village hidden in the leaves" in mtl. The author can put some minor effort into turning it back to "Konoha". The updating rate is pretty good too but since it's mtl, I can't really say anything about this. 5 stars for the time being. The rest is pretty meh and not really to my taste. It's actually really ridiculous that the mc managed to "fall in love" with another girl when he's apparently in "love" with one girl. I wouldn't have minded if both of them were a part of the mc's life but no, the mc "fell in love" with the first girl like when he was 10 years old. Then he mysteriously "fell in love" with another girl like 8 years later. Ridiculous. Honestly speaking, Chinese authors tend to write harem a lot and they also tend to turn out the worst way possible. I really don't know why Chinese novels have the worst harems in general. From lame reasons such as not being to satisfy their partner sexually to their lover being "great" so he must have many women. I mean, I can kinda tolerate and understand the second reason IF it is presented in a REASONABLE way. Whew, whatever. Enough of my rambling. This novel isn't really to my taste but the author did put in considerable effort in it. I'd rate 2.8 for a total rating.
The translation is so much better and some of the other stuff i have read on this site. Keep it up. __________________^^^^^____________^^^^^_____________^^^^^^^______________________________________^_^^^^_____________________^^^^^____________ Good job 👏
Can you continue the MTL simplification work? 👀 Liked how this turned out to be and would like to see the end too. 🍪🍪 Maybe till the day, MC marries off Hinata
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