A boy named Zeal who dreams of voices every night due to one fortuitous encounter when he still a child.
Without the power to influence and change anything around him, every day was utterly similar. One day, someone he meet talks to him, because of her his daily life was changed, causing him to go into his dreams?
A whole new world where magic is a theory and he will uncover the roots and origins of magic along with the friends he'll meet.
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This is basically the first novel I've read so far, so my standards aren't that high. Nonetheless, I'd say the novel is pretty good and unique compared to other novels, especially because of the fact that magic here isn't well known, unlike in other magic-related novels. Overall, I personally think this novel is pretty good, and I definitely hope you keep writing more chapters.
Synopsis could be improved better, but the novel has a great start. It might be one of the topics that isekai and transmigration / fantasy genres readers have been looking into. P.S. Use minimal ellipsis. It could make the readers uncomfy to read.
Interesting concept and very clearly conveyed ideas and plot. Leaving much to desire how the story will continue. Slowly uncovering the world systems and how it works also explain clearly. It's a great read but I find it a bit repetitive on the sentences conveyed thus making it a longer read per chapter. But overall definitely a story worth to read.
Welp this is interesting, I have only read the first two chapters but it definitely keeps you wanting more, I love the main character, reminds me of myself back when I was a high schooler, but other than that the grammar is good and the overall story is interesting. Keep up the good work author.
Grammar could use a lot of work; but the backstory is good. However some of the paragraphs could be shortened to allow for easier reading. The way you tell the story is good, just that explanations are often too long and take a while to read. Shortening it would be for the best.
This book is a great read, the story progress will probably be slow for a while but I can see a lot of detail and care put into this writing. I love how magic doesn't seem to be well known in the story, for me I think I love how they are discovering magic slowly and I hope the author can elaborate on or make an appropriate system for it. The beginning is quite tranquil but I believe it will be worth the read. Also there were a few grammatical errors but I'm not one to talk. Overall a good start