Mushoku Tensei: The forgotten Mob
Patch Note [05/12/2022]: Rudeus part has been compiled together, and more part about MC and his groups' story.
Life is filled with the unexpected.
Today is another normal day in life, as I passed the time with my friends to bully the cursed superd child feared in the village to show our might to her.
A water ball suddenly hit us.
The kid from the knight's office was unleashing his spell to attack us, the bully.
Never would I expect that simple water ball to create a trigger for memories to fill my brain.
I was 5 at that time, and the memories were jumbled. I don't know whether it’s mine or another's. I just know that this is not a memory of a single person.
And, from that memory, I know that I’m actually a mob...
I’m one of Sylphiette’s bullies.
You won’t know me since I am not named in any of the works, whether they were manga, novels, or even anime. Heck, I only say one word and I'm dead in the next part.
an actual mob, where I don’t even appear in either the opening or the ending of the anime.
The thing happened so suddenly.
I don’t know whether I am reincarnated, transmigrated, or just receiving some memories from someone in the real world.
The deadline is 5 years from now, the day the Metastasis incident happened. Can I be another prodigy in the Mushoku Tensei world, or will I still be another slightly better mob?
Disclaimer!
*I’m not a native, so please do tell me if you find any grammar mistakes or better word choices.
*!!! There'd be a lot of web novel parts and less Claude's POV, but it'll get focused over time, so be patient and skim if you don't like some parts. I made it So other reader Can Understand where they are in the Story. It's also my timeline note!
*Thank you very much for reading and your feedback.
*R-18 tags for gore and profanity.
mc is one of sylphies bullies, as a miko he has the ability to experience the lives of versions of him from parallel universes. at first everything is fine but after the teleportation happens and mc meets rudeus all we get are point of views from rudeus to a point where it seems he is the mc and entire chapters from the pov of the narrator. there are so many pov changes that are not the mc that it gets really annoying. simply put after the teleportation incident we occasionally hear from the mc,while emphasis is put on everything but him. the grammar is bad. mc splits his time between magic, swordsmanship and blacksmithing because as a human he has apparently plenty of time to waste. reading this, the story just seems directionless, like the author himself doesn't know where he is going with it. claude(mc) has no goals(or maybe i forgot between the constant pov changes) he is just there. in this story rudeus is still the mc/hero while our mc is just a S/I that kind of drifts along.
meh... if you want to focus the story on Rudeus, I don't see the point of writing a synopsis where it is stated that MC is a random npc. The synopsis is a trap... supposedly the main character would be an ORIGINAL CHARACTER, but he is not. Author or Mc only exist to describe how cool Rudeus is.
Mc is still a mob character. L
I feel like it is too focus on rudeus and not enough on claude. Basically What I am trying to say is that Calude is a side character and really nothing is happening at this point it is just a diary.
Trash. MC is only there to explain to us how cool rudeus is and what he does so i think there is not point in writing this ff........author is just wasting his own time as well as ours
The grammar is middling at best and the dialogue feels like a translated wuxia novel. It's also a self-insert so their is a lot of inner monologue but that comes with this particular category of fanfiction. Not that bad or that great. I came because every other mushoku tensei is a rudeus replacement or rehashing the plot slightly different every time, so the premise and starting point is at least interesting.
I love myself a I dont give a fk narcisstic Mc. Dont worry guys this novel is good stuff, it got the right pace. mmdmdm d d d d d d d d d d d d d rmfkrkdnmrd d d d d d d d d d d d dr d d d d dd d d d d
story pace nya ga jelas kadang cepat dan kadang kadang lama kali, kalau buat cerita MC nya yang mana ini di synopsis katanya claude tapi di cerita 80% POV Rudeus
the MC is a fake and the real MC of this story is still rudeus the MC is a fake and the real MC of this story is still rudeus the MC is a fake and the real MC of this story is still rudeus the MC is a fake and the real MC of this story is still rudeus
Trash. MC is only there to explain to us how cool rudeus is and what he does so i think there is not point in writing this ff........author is just wasting his own time as well as ours
I take back what i said before and now that the rudeus focus centric part of the story is out of the way it kind of started getting good I hope in the future that while there will be other characters POV just please dont make it a multichapter where its just the POV of others as I cane here to know about the story of claude and while its kind of interesting to know what's happening around him and what others think of him, the novelty of it dwindles with more that 1 chapter at a time and starts to get annoying
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the mc doesn't has much time shine and he is still a useless mob 💀💀
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