I'm Otsutsuki Toneri

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Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

First of all the writing quality as well as the update stability is quite good. This is a rare novel as not much fanfis are made on "Solo Levelling". Author has done a good work writing this fanfiction. The problem is that there are just too many problems with the mc. Mc has the power of Toneri and is made quite powerful by the author. But the author forgot to insert a brain in his head. He has a hateful personality and tries to suck up with everyone. Sometimes he is nerfed quite a lot by the author. And many a times situations are forced like when Beru is killed. Though killing Beru didn't matter much, but the way he was killed was quite forced. Though this a review just after 14 chapters, I hope the author will try to develop the personality of the author and decide his power level as well. At least make him strong or weak but don't keep changing his power level frequently. That's all.

Well starting to lose interest the longer I read it, I think mc is less confident in his own strength.Then mc in my opinion is also too fixated on the strength of the original tonery rather than increasing it further, after all, its strength is still related to the chakras. (Google Translate)

mc is the world's biggest retard. What are his truth seeking balls for decoration. can't he just block the attacks of evryone. It's just getting more and more forced as the chapter are increasing. MCs brain is degrading at a faster rate with each chapter, well so is his personality.

The writing is good and this has so much potential please don't waste it like so many others ,...................................................................................................................................

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Tenseigan is nerfed Where is the truth seeking orbs? Why he's weak when the Toneri literally cuts the moon in the half? Besides that, its a pretty fun story so far, but if he has all the knowledge 'bout jutsus, he has to have the truth seeking orbs, its part of his abillities that comes with tenseigan

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pedo author underaged romance ...........................................................................................................................................................

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Tbh, the author doesnt really know much about Naruto or SL lore. You can tell since he keeps mixing up Rinnegan and Tenseigan abilities. Plus, the MC is the definition of a wuss. He’s an S rank, yet he still only does dungeons with other groups. They aren’t even high rank dungeons since he only earned a 100k after doing 8.

Really going good. ..! The fanfics of Solo Leveling generally just replace Jin woo with the mc, but this is quite good ig... Tho IS THIS A HAREM??? If it is plz don't make it a harem

Are you sure u are just a fanfiction author You sure have talent for writing............................................... ............. ..