My System Academy

The story is very good. Unlike 99% of the stories on this site, this one is very well written so far. The main protagonist is not brain dead and can think. So far there has been no romance that drags down the story. His system is pretty well done and not annoying. The world background is well told and diverse. Overall a very good read. Keep up with the updates!.

The concept is great and I like the idea behind it, but punishment systems are the worst because it basically requires the mc to follow the systems orders instead of actually doing anything on his own. Im not even going to get into the demi-human stuff. I kept getting thrown off by thinking that there wasn't a cliche, but then somehow the author throws it in last second as a surprise that you didn't see coming. I just didn't like how the novel played out even though it had a great idea, and the system was very inconsistent with its own logic. "We don't grade talent, we grade personality", "Only profound roots or higher can be taught".

Honestly this could have been perhaps a hidden gem if it wasn't for the fact that it's a cultivation novel. Magic, system and cultivation, three settings that contradict each other in a way that it makes it hard for authors to design a power system that feels impactful, fair and somewhat balanced. In this novel you could hardly feel the 'magic' element, simply replace 'magic spells' with 'martial arts', 'magic' with cultivation and 'academy' with sect and you get yourself a generic cultivation novel where the more our Mc progresses in his story the weaker he actually gets (not technically) , also I don't see the point of the system, it just does everything for our Mc, people in the reviews call him 'smart', 'unique' ... But the system literally gives him everything from randomly invited students that are flowing with talents to mythical-grade magical roots and anything else he happens to need at the convenient time, at this point I'm asking why not make him build the 'academy' from scratch with the help of his sugar daddy (the system)? Or perhaps make him actually care for the 'academy'?. You know, whatever, moving on Whats with the pacing in this novel? Everything happens so suddenly and randomly without any prior development or foreshadowing that any event in this novel whether it's an important side character backstory arc or a simple info dump immediately loses its weight before it even starts. That's again another problem with these type of novels smh

I'm in love with this book. I need more. The plot was great, I can't stop reading, and this book has so much potential the way it was set up. Please if not a mass release at least a chapter a week or preferably a day or two.

This story is really good and really like it's world building. The character developments are well written. I really love this one. Author thanks for the story and need more chapters.

Honest reviews are here. This novel is about transmigrated MC into a magical world where he becomes Master Academy in Heaven Academy.. Heaven Academy used to be top Academy in the world.. Unfortunately, this academy had long forgotten by the world, and now, many people only know it as a myth, which results in many people doubting the existence and the truth of the myth about this academy.. This Academy have a mystery foundation where everyone who become Master, teacher, or student of the academy will awaken the "system" to assist them in cultivation to grow stronger.. That is why this novel has a title of My System Academy. MC is not the only person who has a system in this novel.. This novel has a tag "pretend to be weak" but MC not pretend to be weak, MC is really weak at the start due to he not awaken his talent, magic power, magic root, magic aptitude, magic affinity and magic spell.. MC is given temporary power to pretend his mystery strength to intimidate other people.. MC will eventually become stronger fast with the system help.. This novel has the potential to become one of the hidden gems in webnovel, but unfortunately, there are many plot holes in this novel.. Lack of detail, vague explanation, skipping scene, contradict fact, and so on.. The system said that it prioritise the individual personality, but the system sets a minimum bar soooo high standard in magic attitude and magic root.. For example, the company you interesting on are hiring people, and they said they are looking to a good personality people and not highly educated academic results, BUT they also put a minimum condition to apply for their company into "above 3.75 CGPA" only.. We can only hope the author grows and gain more experience while writing this novel and make the best novel he ever created later on.. Unfortunately, as you can see, this novel has been abandoned.. Even though you read until the latest chapters, you will just waste your time.. It is obvious that the author has given up on writing.. Well, not everyone has a talent in writing a novel.. The author got a good and creative idea, but he can't make a better story due to lack of experience and expertise guide..

So, here is my review. I think the story overall is good, but I feel like it's too little on the academy building and other characters. I somehow find myself skipping chapters in relation to the MC to get back to the scenes of him either A, doing something with the kids, or B, doing something with regard to the other characters. The mc annoys me, but that's primarily because his personality traits are of those people who irritate me in reality. (Not really a negative just an observation) It's a good premise just found myself getting a bit bored when the MC fell on the OP sword and then swung too "I must cultivate, cus weak right now" If his strength comes from being a headmaster...I would like to see more headmastering going on like finding more students, getting teachers, building relations with other schools...so on and so forth.

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dropped Novel ?.......????????????.......

Very nice concept and an idea, however, the author totally wasted the whole thing after the first 20 chapters, *I don't have many issues regarding the strict system because it is supposed to make MC a better academy master, So the strict quest and punishments make sense. *What doesn't make sense is how illogically irresponsible MC is. Believe me it is not a lack of experience, it is just purely stupid. The only reason his students are alive is because of 100% pure luck(or lazy writing in this case). *There are a lot of inconsistencies in the chapters. Example:- How the heck did he forget that the girl he liked is dying because of a curse( Her uncle told that to his face in a previous chapter)? Anyway doesn't worth the time, definitely not worth the money.

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Nice novel The concept the author created are very good and are well implemented in the world background. There are some errors in the plot and the characters lack ‘ true emotion’, Another thing regard the MC, he’s not an idiot, but not that smart either. Try to give him a faster mental growth, the mask should heavily influence his other self. Moreover, the stronger the smart. He doesn’t need to be a genius, but if he can multitask and fight so well then he should not need the system reminder or fall in his own forgetfulness. All in all, it’s a very nice Novell that, if correctly improved, can be brought to a higher level. In my opinion the author have hope of writing top novel in the future, so keep it up.

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this is already good from the start, please do a mass release.............................................,.................................