Title explains everything. Guess I should say my character will be based in certain verses. Nah, lemme rephrase that. My character will be set in a universe then when the time is right, he'll travel to different verses.
writing quality is actually pretty some minor mistakes but it very readable
now story development and character design go hand in hand. and ill say this now, a dcxmha crossover is the dumbest thing on earth. and in the 4th chapter its said he got hurt. doesnt say what by or how but if hes kryptonian then author you are a moron cause kryptonite shouldnt exist at all same with magic or red sun radiation.
the world background is super undeveloped you know literally nothing about the world other than people have quirks.
3 years ago
38
cheeki_breeki
boring af his sister gets introduced like we dont even know her abrupt change from being superhero to yeah lets just kill people it was dumb af not worth the read
3 years ago
21
Vastoking
I lost brain cells reading this, Even Godzilla had it worse. . .
3 years ago
12
End0
I hope you are on a no fly list somewhere in the world . fricken psycho . terrible !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yeah let's just murder people that's perfectly normal
3 years ago
8
French_Deadpool
when I read "The title explains everything" I said to myself, ouch, here is a guy who likes to take shortcuts.
The story is not likely to fly very high (lol) and rightly so, many sequences flown over (lol) have not really fit into the heads of the characters.
And above all it goes strangely fast and slow at the same time, a real artistic feat. I zap after 8 chapter
writing quality is actually pretty some minor mistakes but it very readable now story development and character design go hand in hand. and ill say this now, a dcxmha crossover is the dumbest thing on earth. and in the 4th chapter its said he got hurt. doesnt say what by or how but if hes kryptonian then author you are a moron cause kryptonite shouldnt exist at all same with magic or red sun radiation. the world background is super undeveloped you know literally nothing about the world other than people have quirks.
boring af his sister gets introduced like we dont even know her abrupt change from being superhero to yeah lets just kill people it was dumb af not worth the read
I lost brain cells reading this, Even Godzilla had it worse. . .
I hope you are on a no fly list somewhere in the world . fricken psycho . terrible !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yeah let's just murder people that's perfectly normal
when I read "The title explains everything" I said to myself, ouch, here is a guy who likes to take shortcuts. The story is not likely to fly very high (lol) and rightly so, many sequences flown over (lol) have not really fit into the heads of the characters. And above all it goes strangely fast and slow at the same time, a real artistic feat. I zap after 8 chapter
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