Mae, a 23-year-old, goes looking for a sugar daddy after getting kicked out of the house. She quickly falls in love with him, but after her dad comes to her needing help with his debt, she finds herself working for a loan shark whom she also starts having feelings towards.
Pacing is pretty good. Each chapter flows well into each other without unnecessary stops. Characters are pretty well done as well. Overall quality of writing is fine.
Good character design, the story development is very good and the word background ❤️good work Author, 💯 a few mistakes but they can be fixed in no time keep the good job hoping to see this book getting rewarded. 💯