crushed pride
⭐please, Take your time to read. (¬‿¬) ⭐
the door is a large steel plate, supported by a solid metal lever. the space is small, but clean. ⁓"somewhat crowded for my liking"⁓ I say as I walk in.
Upon entering the room the woman tells me. ⁓ "You'll excuse the place. But business, it's too scarce for us, you know" ⁓ the lady shows me her voluptuous figure. That confused me a bit, maybe there was something I was missing.
Seeing that I remain silent and frowning, the woman comments. ⁓"our Race is characterized by constant fights, where we rarely lose"⁓ that made me reason a bit, I think I wouldn't want to fuck enough if they beat me up either.
The woman smiles at me, as she secures the door with a steel bar that is used as a bolt, the metal bar, was crossed horizontally, I turn my head taking a quick look around the room.
It is a small room of 4m x 3m with a sofa-bed, a wardrobe and a dresser. From the clothes and other things scattered around the place, everything seems to indicate that between 3 to 4 people sleep here.
suddenly the woman points to the wall, where there is a price poster and she tells me. ⁓"before we start"⁓ when I go back to see the price list, my mouth drops open and I say out loud the first thing that comes to mind. ⁓ "Jesus Christ" ⁓ the woman smiles and continues commenting to me, while she tries to tidy up the place a bit. ⁓"by the way, my name is Deborah. "⁓
I raise my hand in greeting and say. ⁓"nice to meet you, my name is James, but you can call me Max"⁓ but I keep looking at the price sign and ask. ⁓ "It's serious." ⁓ I have the strange feeling of having entered, in a den of bandits. a place more dangerous than walking around the club naked.
Deborah just lets out a sigh, before making a face, which pretends to be a smile, and she tells me. ⁓"it's true."⁓ comes closer and continues commenting to me... ⁓"do you want the official version or for clients."⁓ hearing that, I just roll my eyes, before going to sit on the sofa, the truth was not that I cared, I just shrug and say. ⁓"the one you want. "⁓
Deborah clears her throat and says something embarrassed. ⁓"for women of our Race it is very difficult to get pregnant, that's why we are here."⁓
⁓ "But they come to that. You don't think your prices are too exaggerated" ⁓ She commented while pointing at the price poster.
⁓ "Obviously no one wants to pay those prices, that's why we're in this unfortunate situation." ⁓ Deborah tells me, as she picks up the clothes off the floor and continues talking to me. ⁓ "In order to be here there are certain rules that we have to respect, among the rules are the income and the more days we are here the better, but that will cost us money and when that money runs out, we have to return home, defeated. " ⁓
I pointed to the rates on the billboard and asked. ⁓ "Which includes this." ⁓ Deborah's face turns red and she speaks with annoyance. ⁓ "stops shaming me" ⁓
⁓ "It's just a question, maybe it's convenient for me to pay you know, help your cause.. "⁓ I say with a lascivious smile on my face, while I settle in the armchair.
Now it was Deborah rolls her eyes at her and she answers me by sitting down next to me. ⁓"everyone knows those prices are a joke inside the club, we use them to scare away obnoxious customers, no one would be desperate enough to pay such ridiculous prices."⁓
I just stare at Deborah waiting for a better explanation of this ball of nonsense. at the end Deborah snorts and tells me. ⁓ "Okay, ok I'll explain." ⁓ She gets up and points to the sign ⁓ "We have three types of services: Normal, Professional and Exclusive." ⁓
⁓"the normal service is for people we like and it only costs from $100 USD to $500 USD. That would help us keep paying for this place for a couple more months"⁓
⁓"the following is the Professional service and it is for neutral people who are nice, costing from $1,000 USD to $5,000 USD. "⁓
⁓ "Lastly, the Exclusive service is for our enemies and they must pay from $10,000 USD to $50,000 USD. "⁓ Hearing that makes me let out a big sigh and I comment. ⁓"what kind of service would you charge me"⁓
⁓"I smell some Vanity in the air. "⁓ says Deborah and lets out a laugh at the end of the comment. she turned around and she starts to take off her little sundress, she says to me. ⁓ "If you leave me satisfied, the service will always be free every time you ask me, what do you think of that." ⁓ At the end of her comment, Deborah also finishes taking off her dress and throws it in a corner.
Looking closely at her body, it makes me swallow a bit of saliva which makes Deborah smile and I reply. ⁓"I promise I'll try my best."⁓ Then I hit the sofa with my hand and say. ⁓"Come, let's take a closer look. "⁓
Deborah smiles at me again and slowly approaches the sofa, being close Deborah immediately straddles my legs and hugs my neck, in response I hold her waist and lean my body back.
for the first time I don't want to fall face down on the ground and make a fool of myself. our height difference this time works in my favor. because my face was right in front of her chest.
Deborah warns me in a very calm voice. ⁓"Honestly, I don't know what the hell you did with the Queen, but I would also like the same treatment and you only have one hour to show all your skills that's clear."⁓
Curious at her warning, he asked ⁓ "what happens when that time is up?" ⁓
Deborah immediately answers me. ⁓"I'll show you the main reason, because people call me child-eating. "⁓ but before I start I point to my dick and say. ⁓"that's very interesting, but first I'll need some help. "⁓
Deborah looks down and flashes a smile, licks her lips and nods, stands up, ready to kneel in front of my legs.
*knock knock knock*
the noise of the door interrupts us, seconds after knocking on the door, a voice is heard saying. ⁓"Deb. are forming some groups to go look for that rat. "⁓
Deborah returns to the door and lets out a sigh, before looking at me and saying quietly. ⁓ "Shhh" ⁓ he puts one of his fingers to his lips, she leans in and whispers to me. ⁓"We don't want anyone to find out you're here. Right."⁓ while leaning his body a little more and his lips touch my ears and whisper again ⁓"now, let's see what we have to eat this day."⁓ grab the knot of the robe at the waist and tries to open it.
*Knock, knock, knock, knock*
⁓"Deb. Open up, I know you're in, Deb, friend, friend come on, open up or I'll start yelling that you have pizza, I'd better yell that you have hamburgers and fries, those women, swallow worse than Anaconda in heat. "⁓ the woman says before knocking again.
*Knock, knock, knock, knock*
Deborah snorts in annoyance, gets up from my lap, and snaps her lips together. *Mich* She walks up to the door and yells loudly. ⁓ "Fuck you friend" ⁓ Starting a little verbal fight with the woman behind the door, while Deborah and her friend are arguing, I take advantage of the time and take out my cell phone.
When I check the cell phone screen, I open the App. [💲]
The first thing I did was close my eyes and press the [Level+1] button until there was no more money left, because it was a necessary investment for my future.
It also came with two great surprises, the first is a type of online store, to buy all kinds of name things. [Articles ]
In this store, you can find all kinds of materials and items from a simple pencil to an airplane or some exclusive products with strange names, tools or books.
The next section, unlocked at Level 15, is the most interesting, called [ Special abilities ] where you keep a count of the abilities you get and the description in a more specific way
The App didn't give me anything special but just knowing that I can have one or several skills like [ ghost cock ] that are out of this world, was something that started to excite me.
⚜ Upgrade Points: [ 1️⃣6️⃣ ]
having 16 points and nothing to lose, I distribute 2 points in each of the improvements, doubling my physical and intellectual abilities, going from an ordinary person to a person Rank: 2️⃣
Rank: 2️⃣ = doubles all your abilities, strength, speed and stamina also increases the number of income x2. (amount X N°⭐ X Range) example: 1000 x7 x2= $14000 USD.
I felt like a Steve Roger before taking the clear serum, just thinking about the capacity my body will have with a higher Rank.
Can you imagine being a person with muscles so dense that bullets bounce off me or my bones as hard as diamond or I can lift car with one hand.
🧍♂️ [Man ♂ ]
⚜ Name: James Maxwell
⚜ Rank: 2️⃣
⚜ Level: 1️⃣6️⃣
⚜ Physical Upgrades: [1️⃣0️⃣]
[ Bones: 2️⃣ ] [ Organs: 2️⃣ ] [ Blood: 2️⃣] [ Muscles: 2️⃣] [ Skin: 2️⃣]
⚜ Intellectual Enhancements: 6️⃣
[ Memory: 2️⃣] [ Intelligence: 2️⃣] [ Reasoning: 2️⃣]
⚜ Special abilities: 1️⃣
[ Ghost Cock. ( 16/ 84s.) ]
⚜ Upgrade Points: [ 0️⃣ ]
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Max jumps up from the couch, still excited by the information he just received and walks over to Deborah who is in front of the door and was still arguing with her roommate.
Max first touches her shoulder to avoid startling Deborah and makes the same gesture that Deborah had made minutes before. ⁓ "Shhh" ⁓ Devora just nods and goes back to the door, this is used by Max to place himself on her back and he starts to slide his hands on Deborah's back.
the effects are minimal on Deborah, but this doesn't stop Max from pushing Deborah's back forward.
Deborah's face suddenly changes as she realizes Max's intentions and she immediately shakes her head and adds quietly. ⁓"no"⁓ Max just keeps pushing Deborah's body.
Facing the door, Deborah lets out a sigh and tilts her body enough to put her hands on top of the door.
now Max returns to continue rubbing his hands on the back, when he reaches the clasp of the bra Max takes his time to remove it and let it fall to the floor.
Max moves his hands to his sides, but due to his short stature. Max has to stick to Deborah's body, sticking his erection between her buttocks and begins to poke insistently, while her fingers run over the relief of her back towards her tits.
causing Deborah to close her eyes and let out little moans. ⁓ "Ah you're making me hot .." ⁓ he says quietly, but Max doesn't stop and moves his hands further, reaching the breasts, with his open hands he slides his fingers covering only 1/2 of each breast.
that was the largest possible volume, that he could hold in his small hands. immediately Max, presses them, plays, kneads and deforms the tits, until the nipples harden and he also holds them between his fingers, making Deborah's body tremble. complaining again in a low voice. ⁓"sss-ah"⁓
in response to Max's series of caresses.
Deborah tilts her body a little more this time at 75° degrees resting her hands on the door.
Max has to lower his hands, runs along the sides of the chest, passing through the waist, until he reaches the hip, but his hands do not stop them. he continues sliding and grabs the edges of the panties and begins to lower them, make Deborah look at Max again. She swallows a mouthful of saliva and says quietly. ⁓"wait, not here, don't do it. "⁓ but Deborah's body said the opposite.
Max stops pulling her panties down to mid-thigh and moves her hands back up stroking, hips, waist, and back, making Deborah's body tremble again and she whispers in annoyance. ⁓"We go, stop playing"⁓
Max separates her body, opens the robe, grabs her cock and puts it between Deborah's buttocks and rubs it a couple of times, ⁓ "Oh nice" ⁓ Max comments as he slides his cock between the opening of the two buttocks.
⁓ "Mmm" ⁓ Deborah says. as she feels the cock of Max slide.
*rub, rub, rub, rub*
Outside the door, the woman has stopped knocking and tries to listen to her roommate. ⁓"hey, Deb. what the hell are you doing."⁓ asks the woman but no one answers.
Deborah snorts loudly and calls out. ⁓ "Go" ⁓ as she spreads her legs and bends her forearms to rest on the door for her support and lowers her head into her arms.
Max puts a hand between Deborah's thighs again and begins to move her fingers slowly up to her crotch.
Max rubs her pussy with his fingers several times, smearing them with nectar causing Deborah's instant reaction. ⁓"Aiii"⁓
Max puts one of her fingers on the anus, presses it a little and withdraws, seconds later he presses it again and takes it out again, repeating this action several times.
⁓"Sss-Ah, Sss-Ah, God."⁓ Deborah murmurs
Max rubs the pussy again to use the Nectar again as a lubricant and facilitates the penetration of the finger several times.
time later...
Max brings his index finger to Deborah's mouth and commands ⁓"suck it"⁓ Deborah immediately opens her mouth and sucks on the finger, two or three times to fill it with saliva, not satisfied with that, she spits on the finger, to fill it with a good portion of saliva.
Max puts his finger back into the hole, but this time more easily as he is better lubricated, putting his finger in and out much better than before.
Now Max walks away and brings his hip closer to Deborah's face and orders again as he moves her cock closer. ⁓ "Chupa" ⁓ this time Deborah opens her eyes and immediately kneels down, while she opens her mouth, swallowing the cock in one bite and starts sucking it.
⁓"hey Deb, what the hell was that, Deb. who the hell are you friends with, Deb replies. "⁓ asks the woman insistently.
⁓"You can't shut her up"⁓ asks Max
⁓"Shut the fuck up and get the hell out"⁓ yells Deborah
⁓"Friend I also want some cash you know, I need money urgently."⁓ The woman answers
Deborah looks at Max and comments. ⁓"that's true, most of them only have one meal a day" ⁓ Max snorts, but searches his clothes for the cash, when he finds it, he hands it to Deborah and says ⁓"I want a pizza and two hamburgers with soda big."⁓ Deborah looks at the $300 USD in her hand and makes a somewhat complicated face.
⁓"do you want to eat before we start? We'll use her as a messenger this way she'll stop screwing around."⁓ The last part was said out loud by Max.
I hear the snort of the woman behind the door and comments with annoyance. ⁓"fuck you, I'm not going anywhere."⁓
moments later....
Deborah opens the door just a crack and hands over the money. ⁓ "Here, bring me two pizzas and a fruit juice." ⁓ The woman tries to see through the door before receiving the money, she snorts a couple of times and wants to see again who the hell was the man who was inside. Deborah rolls her eyes and says. ⁓"I'm hungry. "⁓
The woman snorts again and comments ⁓ "okay, I'll be right back, don't let that bastard order you around friend, you should show pride." ⁓ Deborah was about to respond when she fell silent. ⁓ "Oh, Sss-Mnn" ⁓ She closes her eyes, grabs onto the door and tries to concentrate, to keep from letting out any moans, as her body begins to move and a noise of applause is heard behind Deborah.
*PA, PA, PA, PA, PA. *
The woman stayed silent watching how her friend was fucked just half a meter away. ⁓"don't stay like an idiot Keyla."⁓ Deborah says with annoyance before closing the door and can be heard complaining ⁓"why the hell did you start fucking me, Aahh, Aahh good, fuck me, Aahh, god. "⁓ Deborah says, while trying to hold on to the door
*PA, PA, PA, PA, PA. *
outside Keyla had her mouth open, they were fucking Deborah inside the room, then she looks at the money in her hand and turned around, she had to hurry up she needed to know who the hell was fucking Deborah.
Discomfort out of the way, Max gripped Deborah's hips tightly and continued to penetrate her, with ease due to the small size of his cock being unobstructed. and he just concentrates on continuing to penetrate again and again in a desperate way.
*PA, PA, PA, PA, PA. *
On her part, Deborah's body is very relaxed, although she can feel the penetration, it's not a big deal, it gave her satisfaction but was only the necessary, at the level of a normal dildo.
*PA, PA, PA, PA, PA. *
in a couple of minutes, when Max feels his imminent ejaculation with a smile on his lips he says in his mind [Ghost Cock] making Deborah's body tense completely, he opens his eyes to what she most could.
at that moment and with just one penetration she felt her sphincters hit with a mallet and screams loudly ⁓ "Aahh. Aahh Ahh" ⁓ while Max continues to accelerate faster and faster.
*PA, PA, PA, PA, PA. *
⁓ "Slow down you bastard, slow down you son of a bitch, you'll break me down, you're breaking me"⁓ Deborah yells as her body tenses and she begins to have one of the biggest orgasms of her life, at the same time, her bladder couldn't resist and She urinated from the pain generated in her guts, while Max ejaculates inside her anus screaming. ⁓"ohhhh"⁓
when all the emotion of the moment ends, Deborah's body falls to the ground without strength and visibly exhausted, not understanding what the hell just happened. but things weren't over, Max gets up close to Deborah's face and orders. ⁓"suck"⁓
Deborah was obviously ready to refuse and lifted her face in annoyance to start complaining about the mistreatment she received.
but before speaking, a strong smell of strawberries reached her nose, avoiding comment and without thinking for a long time, Deborah opened her mouth and began to suck Max's semi-erect cock without any problem.
the more he sucks the more and more he likes the taste of semen, to the point of starting to run her tongue over various sensitive parts of the cock, causing Max's satisfaction ⁓ "yeah you're good yeah you're very good. " ⁓
Receiving the compliments from Max, Deborah's smile betrays her and she sucks his cock with more enthusiasm, until it is completely clean and erect. ⁓"wait a minute"⁓ Deborah says before getting up and running to the couch to unfold the bed and settle in with her ass up.
Deborah starts to shake her ass and says ⁓"come on, this time, I'm better prepared."⁓ Without another word, Max climbs on the bed and slaps Deborah's butt before settling on her back. he grabs, lines up the dick and comments. ⁓"this time I won't go so easy"⁓ seconds later Deborah's moans are heard throughout the room scaring the neighboring rooms.
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By the time she returned with the food, there were a dozen women outside the room, trying to hear what was going on inside, and seeing Keyla approaching, the women immediately run to meet her and warn. ⁓"Hey, I think the child-eater is being killed"⁓ says one of the women.
another corrects her and says ⁓"you're crazy I think that woman is giving birth."⁓ Keyla just rolls her eyes at the ridiculous comments of these women and says with annoyance. ⁓"to one side, to one side, you should move away, I'm going to come in."⁓ Without saying anything else, Keyla knocks on the door.
⁓"who is it?"⁓ asks Max
that surprises everyone outside but Keila responds. ⁓"I'm back with the food. "⁓ Without answering Max just opens the door a little and before Max says anything, Keyla enters the room and tells him. ⁓"shut up, those gossips, they just want to eat for free."⁓ Max immediately closes the door.
⁓"Jesus Christ"⁓ says Keyla looking at the mess inside the room. ⁓"what the fuck did they do"⁓ comments Keila. seeing Max's appearance she stops any further comment and walks over to Deborah to see if she was still breathing.
Deborah looked like a run over dog.
Seeing that she was fine and it was just a faint, Keyla let out a sigh. but Deborah's appearance was terrible very terrible. her eyes blank, tongue sticking out, mouth open, saliva dripping, in addition to reeking of urine and strawberries.
Max just walked over to the food, under Keila's watchful eye. who asks ⁓ "You're Blasphemy right." ⁓ Max nods, as he eats his burger.
⁓"We're going to have a meeting."⁓ Keyla says before getting up and starting to take off her Legging, Max continues eating and responds without any problem. ⁓"Okay."⁓