a certain psychopath is transported to a different world,
where several anime come true and come together in one world,
MC is a psychopath to some extent and MC has no fixed personality,
sometimes the MC is stupid sometimes the MC is very smart,
the point is MC doesn't have a consistent personality,
this is a big harem, and the MC will always pick up whoever he likes.
It’s a nice ff-story, the grammar is a bit bad but if you can skip that then it is a good story.. the only thing I don’t like is that I don’t f— understand what’s going on lol. At one time he is sealing his powers(?) then he goes f— Asia and other things. It doesn’t make any sense why they sealed his power I think the only reason the author sealed his powers is to have him f— everybody like a monkey 🙈 But yea, it isn’t the best ff-story but also not the worst out here on WN. ✝️
hope this gets updated😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
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I really wanted to read this but just from the first sentences i saw that it would be difficult, the writing is not completely atrocious but it kills any immersion. Anyway thanks for writing an grisaia fanfic author-san
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the story is not bad, i am just irritated that kazami and itami's first name (youji) became their family name,. the grammar has small mistskes but its ok
It's not that bad or anything, you just need to slow down the phase a little bit, and a proper translator.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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Gak terlalu bagus amat. Malah mirip cerpen sampah. Aku sungguh heran dengan ide gak terlalu bagus, dialog terlalu membosankan, dan penulisan terlalu singkat, sehingga aku bertanya-tanya ini penulis niat cerita atau bersin terus buang ke tong sampah.