Witching Hour: Episode 0
Author: Brok3n01
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Will and John, Step brothers turned orphans due to a fatal home accident, face facts and come to realizations about how their lives are about to change due to the accident that killed their parents and how it relates to the cursed things lurking in the streets of the city at night spelling imminent doom for the humans and the inhumane.
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I love the build up in the chapter and it's quite amazing. My advice would be in your use of paragraphs, punctuations and your conversations. When each character is speaking play it or do a monologue, to see if the character is too wordy and is saying redundant things or is realistic and just how said character speaks.
This is an amazing book. I'd love to see more of this. Nice character design, the storyline is lit and the background story is fire. Love this.