My Bloody Valentine

Honestly, this is one of the best novels I have read, I hope the author will have time to continue writing! .............................................................

I like all of the author's books they're intriguing and I could learn some things from them when it comes to writing. Her writing style is amazing😍 I would recommend you read her works they're all very fantastic. Even the author is friendly and kind. I can't even describe this properly in words. I'm also a big fan of vampire tropes so I like it very much!

I love how Valerie is a bag full of curiosity. I love that every time I read a beautifully written sentence, a vivid image will quickly form in my mind. I love to read more chapters, please!

This is an addictive story and there are so many new words i got to learn from it 😅 but the dialogues are great... Well done your writing skills are very good.

The story started with a high spirit! I love the opening line as if it was pacing the setting for the whole book. The character development is nice and at times it feels so real. Maybe for that I should give you the credit. Your writing style engages a person. Even though there are only 5 chapters, I am eager to read more! Do write more. XOXO

The description and narration style of the author kept me going, and as a writer that spent her days watching movies, I can hear the tone of the characters. The tone, emotion of their voice. The dialogues being written is natural, which I admired. I find the world-building relaxing.

Im so glad this book has surfaced! The detail between chapters is pretty immersive. i am enjoying the storyline thus far. I do wish the chapters were longer but they begin and end with interest! 💗

ok, I will start from world-building - the story is weaving open the world matching with the pace of the plot is unraveling which is beautifully done. There are no info-dumps or extras thrown by Author to overwhelm Readers. Second - Valeri, the protagonist, is an analogous personality to state the story in the first person along with our male lead - Avalon, who is not yet given much screen time but I am hoping he would do justice to our lovely female lead. On the other hand, Other characters are quite predictable with an overprotective yet loving father, a kind female playing mother role, etc. My simple advice to the author since there aren't many chapters released right now is to introduce some unique or unpredictable thing to make this story fare different from other romance ones. But in the end, the Novel is wonderful till now and I will be looking out for future chapters...

The description in this novel is so vivid it is amazing! I completely lost myself in the reading to the point that when I ran out of chapters it actually took a moment to realize that there wasn't any more and it wasn't a case of me doing something wrong! The pacing is impeccable as well. I'm new to the genre and this is the novel that guaranteed my interest. It's definitely going into my library.