When the Creator said "Let there be light", the Darkness retreated and stayed inactive for unknown ages.
The question is did the creator manifest that light or was it there even before him/her.
( This novel will be focused in The lucifer tv series universe, the young justice universe and possibly in the future the marvel universe.)
I know my work won't be perfect so I'm not giving it 5 stars. But thanks for giving it a try. And don't be afraid to comment suggestions or things I could possibly add to the story to make it better.
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Nice start and has potential but i hope mc isn’t the hero type kind of person. He had his 3O’s on b4 so he should have seen/experienced betrayal, sadness, anger and so on, so i hope mc is the neutral type of guy that doesn’t care abt the death of strangers. If he is then i’m ssry but it’s just unrealistic and not my cup of tea so i‘ll drop. Other than that keep up the good work.
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its actually not bad.