A teen wants nothing more then to just relax and keep up his interest that he has always had, but why does this system keep stopping him from doing what he wants to do?
I own nothing but my OC and my Ideas, everything else goes to the creator.
you can read this but don't expect something good, lack of logic/plot below average world building and stupid writing. that's it that's 140 character.
3 years ago
68
DAOIST_SUPREME
MC is a simp 😑
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3 years ago
48
Kinsos
i can already tell that this book shall be one of my favorites, ive seen a lot of teen wolf fanfic but only most of them doesnt make th mc op from the start.
love what youre writting cant wait for more chapters[img=update]
3 years ago
32
Dio_Brandon
I will continue reading but if the author continues with the forced drama, I will leave it. The author turned the two girls into unpleasant people, and the Mc with a lack of self-esteem if they already have a partner, why do you want to be with them, if they cheat on their current partner, do you think they will not cheat on you
3 years ago
31
aman10
if you fine with ntr fetish then go ahead enjoy this novel mc is simp , he is not confident enough to say a girl simple no and he has no problem in being used 🤢🗑️🖕🤬🤮🧟
3 years ago
28
Dracmon13
a lot of drama, author is pushing it sometimes,the plot itself is rubbish, it seems the author is depressed , I will drop good lock [Google Translator]
3 years ago
25
Cobey
Bro I have personally never seen anything worse nice try though author…………………………….hdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhshshshshshhshshhurrueeheeheheheheeheeheeh
3 years ago
22
Propendol
absolutely stupid work. not logical, with a bunch of plot holes (is there a plot at all?). and the main character is generally odd. apart from the fact that kukold. so also dumb as a stool. we have a werewolf being hunted, the main character knows who this werewolf is and is afraid for his mother, what do you think he will do? nothing. and even more amusing is that the hunters didn't even press him to find out who it was. and they didn't check whether he was a person at all or not. most of the reactions are either exaggerated or not understood at all. like the same moment with his puppetry. allows a girl to sleep with herself, flirt, etc. but at the same time she meets with another. my God, this mc is wearing some kind of fetishistic rose-colored glasses and looks through them at the world.
3 years ago
19
Sasha_Reaper
At first, I enjoyed reading, but when it came to the relationship with Lydia and Alison, I realized that this fic was all over. The character of the protagonist is disgusting, it feels like I'm watching an NTR novel where all the girls cheat on the protagonist, while the girls still love him.
I don't understand why the author made things so difficult. If he wanted a normal relationship for the protagonist, which is not disgusting to watch, then it was necessary to change the canon, and not follow it.
Story is interesting from what we can tell MC is not reincarnated he's just an OC from that verse with a system, at the start he sounds kinda whiny but he gets more relaxed the more chapters you read through. I enjoy Authors Allison she's really fun to read the only thing I'm worried is MC revealing System also I'm pretty sure MC is a Reincarnated Person and will probably awaken Memories later on and he won't be able to do anything cause the plot has already been fked.
PS MC has My Little Pony Hair so be warned to wear Sunglasses.
3 years ago
11
ApoloJackson
Pathetic development, the author keeps making excuses to keep the original plot and for that he keeps putting the "protagonist" in unfortunate situations with no purpose for the story. So far he only managed to prove how superficial girls are and even made a chapter to defend them, that is, 20 chapters of useless text. With that in mind, I suggest new readers skip ahead to chapter 20 and see if they like this kind of drag drama, otherwise they'll waste their time and get annoyed.
3 years ago
10
Dave_kingmaker
Reveal Spoiler
3 years ago
9
raphaelodinson
Honestly, it's amazing how many people hate the mc and the author still makes people hate him more. The mc is a simp, a hypocrite. Allison character here is awful, lydia too.
you can read this but don't expect something good, lack of logic/plot below average world building and stupid writing. that's it that's 140 character.
MC is a simp 😑 .
i can already tell that this book shall be one of my favorites, ive seen a lot of teen wolf fanfic but only most of them doesnt make th mc op from the start. love what youre writting cant wait for more chapters[img=update]
I will continue reading but if the author continues with the forced drama, I will leave it. The author turned the two girls into unpleasant people, and the Mc with a lack of self-esteem if they already have a partner, why do you want to be with them, if they cheat on their current partner, do you think they will not cheat on you
if you fine with ntr fetish then go ahead enjoy this novel mc is simp , he is not confident enough to say a girl simple no and he has no problem in being used 🤢🗑️🖕🤬🤮🧟
a lot of drama, author is pushing it sometimes,the plot itself is rubbish, it seems the author is depressed , I will drop good lock [Google Translator]
Bro I have personally never seen anything worse nice try though author…………………………….hdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhshshshshshhshshhurrueeheeheheheheeheeheeh
absolutely stupid work. not logical, with a bunch of plot holes (is there a plot at all?). and the main character is generally odd. apart from the fact that kukold. so also dumb as a stool. we have a werewolf being hunted, the main character knows who this werewolf is and is afraid for his mother, what do you think he will do? nothing. and even more amusing is that the hunters didn't even press him to find out who it was. and they didn't check whether he was a person at all or not. most of the reactions are either exaggerated or not understood at all. like the same moment with his puppetry. allows a girl to sleep with herself, flirt, etc. but at the same time she meets with another. my God, this mc is wearing some kind of fetishistic rose-colored glasses and looks through them at the world.
At first, I enjoyed reading, but when it came to the relationship with Lydia and Alison, I realized that this fic was all over. The character of the protagonist is disgusting, it feels like I'm watching an NTR novel where all the girls cheat on the protagonist, while the girls still love him. I don't understand why the author made things so difficult. If he wanted a normal relationship for the protagonist, which is not disgusting to watch, then it was necessary to change the canon, and not follow it.
Author, Go to watt pad NTR.
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Story is interesting from what we can tell MC is not reincarnated he's just an OC from that verse with a system, at the start he sounds kinda whiny but he gets more relaxed the more chapters you read through. I enjoy Authors Allison she's really fun to read the only thing I'm worried is MC revealing System also I'm pretty sure MC is a Reincarnated Person and will probably awaken Memories later on and he won't be able to do anything cause the plot has already been fked. PS MC has My Little Pony Hair so be warned to wear Sunglasses.
Pathetic development, the author keeps making excuses to keep the original plot and for that he keeps putting the "protagonist" in unfortunate situations with no purpose for the story. So far he only managed to prove how superficial girls are and even made a chapter to defend them, that is, 20 chapters of useless text. With that in mind, I suggest new readers skip ahead to chapter 20 and see if they like this kind of drag drama, otherwise they'll waste their time and get annoyed.
Reveal Spoiler
Honestly, it's amazing how many people hate the mc and the author still makes people hate him more. The mc is a simp, a hypocrite. Allison character here is awful, lydia too.