Life Through the American TV Show World

As a blk guy I love Chinese novels when only Chinese ppl are in them or mostly Asian bc it seems like any other race in these stories are Super stereotypes . I don’t get it at all at this point the story is good but the stereotypical tv blk guy stuff is cringy to me. 😅😅😅😭😭😂 I repeat I like the story so far but this stuff really is unimmersive to me.

auto translate chinese bs with chat gpt writing style . bad overall gives brain damage ... don't waste your time on this

MC is PJ Duncan but kept insisting his name is Adam. IDK man, this is so messy. I'm quite interested on the first 2 chapters.

Did a human even write this? Or at least read it while editing? Especially the dialogues!? Horror...

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Honestly ,for a translation, it's barely passable . There aren't any major grammatical mistakes, so you can read it fine. Overall, my biggest problem with the story is the mc and his incredibly bland personality. He has the same problem as all those typical Chinese MCs who's either constantly horny or a monk . This guy is a monk archetype. Now, I'm not saying him to sleep with every woman he sees . What I'm saying is this mc has to manage his interpersonal relationship much, much better. The way he constantly avoids women it shows the authors inability to write any decent interaction with any woman . I'll see a few more chapters after that. I'll probably drop it.

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Threat of death is funny for a bit. But this whole do good deeds is just lame.

It's hard to read and follow. It's got the feel of lazy auto-gen slop. No care has been taken to make the processed translation readable, Basically MTL Power Stone scamming.

please find a beta reader who is able to work with both languages. the story feels like it could really succeed if you rewrote this with somone how is familiar with a slightly more fluent grammar structure. Also, your MC does feel a little one dimensional & obsessed with a slow stat development. they are a gamer, have the charecter embrace the grind in life.

I Loved Almost Everything, Aside from the Lack of Explanation of the Good Luck Charlie Movie: Merry Christmas. But the way they related to the cast of the Series was great considering the Time of everything that happened in their respective Series. Without stopping Talking about Never interacting with the Women of the Program

Story is not bad but orginal author is too concervative about relationship and it have big impact in the story, it ruins the whole novel ....................... .......................

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