Divine Hack System
The world has become a video game-like place. Monsters began to appear everywhere on the planet, governments began to dispatch armies to protect cities, but powerful monsters were unaffected by common weapons.
When despair was about to make humanity destroy itself, people began to awaken powers that made them strong enough to deal with the mighty monsters.
These people were called "Awakened Ones".
Years passed and society got used to dealing with monsters. Children who once dreamed of becoming actors, musicians or youtubers, now dreamed of "Awakening" to receive powers, fight monsters and receive the fame and money that came with this dangerous profession.
Leo was also like those children, and when he turned 17 his powers also awakened, but very different from what he imagined it would be.
[Congratulations, you have awakened the "Hack" power. Your first skill is "Aim-bot."]
[Aim-bot: Regardless of which weapon you use, no shot will miss.]
And the stronger Leo got, the more powers he would unlock.
"Aim-Bot, Wall Hack, Speed Hack, Fly Hack, Kill-Aura, Teleport Hack… all the hacks people used in games now I can use in real life?!" Leo was shocked when he saw the abilities he would unlock.
"I often heard people say that the world is a playground for rich and powerful people, now this will become my own playground!" Leo told himself a few years ago as a joke, but no one could have imagined that those words would become an absolute truth years later.
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Well, let's go. So far, the protagonist has proved to be very consistent, very different from the cliché of a protagonist that many authors on this site are doing. His system doesn't make the protagonist OP to the point where no one can fight him, but it still makes him very strong, which is good. The background world currently seems to have a lot of consistency, because of what it was presented and how everything is unfolding, even showing some differences from our current world to the novel world in a discreet way that doesn't interrupt the reading. In the end, you didn't let me down with these chapters, and I believe that with you posting chapters every day you won't let me down in the future.
I was surprised, I couldn't find any point to criticize in this story, the rhythm is good, perfect grammar, the author knows how to express well what is happening in the scene, besides always making me want to read more. POST MORE CHAPTERS FASTER
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Author has talent, what he writes is beautiful and original, but also has a major flaw. He can't continue writing a story. Once he makes a novel it will be abandoned in a couple weeks. Therefore as good as it may be it amount to nothing. I recommend not spending money on these short, unfinished stories until he starts to focus up.
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It's good with little problems for now. I just hope that the Author grows up from being a disappointment and stop dropping the Novel like all his others. The the main reason why this does not get a 4 star
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
The novel is fairly solid and entertaining with a few small issues here and there my main concern though is the author stopping this out of nowhere like many of his other novels
Bland narration and bad dialogue..... there are no apparent spelling errors that disturb the reading, but the text itself doesn't convey any emotion, nor is it interesting, it's just text and more text.
i like your novel its just that you always drop it so i will start reading when your novel have 100+ chapter. i dont want to be stuck in a cliffhanger with no new chapter hahahhahahah
another dropped novel after the initial good chaoters, can't even make it past 50 chapters... so many good novels being given up just like that left and right. .. .. ashamed
I’ve waited years, please continue the novel 🙏😭
The first 20 or so chapters were good and I have nothing bad to say about it. The writing quality throughout the novel is excellent. Minor spoiler alert My main problem is with the MCs himself and the world developement. I dropped this around chap 36 mainly because this mc is acting cautious FOR NO REASON. 36 chapters in and there is no credible reason why he’s hiding his power, just ‘ooh let me use 20% of my power so I can get into this so if someone disagrees I can face slap them’, ‘I’m gonna go to this super powerful institute and act like a normal student so I can fit in’. When it reality the MC going to the institute is essentially holding him back from becoming more powerful. Now you might say, well young master what if he’s going there to make connections or enjoy the resources he’ll get as an elite student. Well sure, except HES HIDING HIS POWER TO THE POINT PEOPLE THINK HIS A GENERIC CANNON FODDER. Sigh if I’m wrong and the novel picks up after this just reply in the comments but I doubt it’ll get any better. I personally actually enjoy cautious MCs but this one feels like the authors just forcing it to happen and it just ruins the novel. Word development is sub-par at best, all we know is the generic ‘MoNsTeRs ToOk OvEr EaRtH wHeN tHeY mUtAtEd’ and it’s just lazy writing. Understandbly it is still early days since there’s only 50 chapters out at the time of this review but how do we know barely anything about the world. No teasers, no hints, no nothing. Feels like one of those novels where there’s gonna be a massive info dump in the future to make up for it and I am not there for it. To be fair I’ll probably read as a filler once the updates become more frequent since I do like the idea behind the novel. but I’m just disappointed with the way it’s turned out to be. Sigh
I don’t often review, but I feel like I need to drop one here before the story progresses too much, as it has potential. Story is good, characters are good, although they could be a little more flushed out, while the world at the moment is a little generic. Main issue I have is the writing quality. This is one of those odd balls where it seems the quality actually went down as the story progressed. Once we started getting to the paid chapters, grammatical errors, sentence structure and typos became more prevalent. Author, would suggest looking into getting an editor, as much of this could be fixed.
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