honestly i was a expecting this to be a one time read that i won't open again after the first chapter with how the mc was acting but from what i have seen after there is potential in this.
he may act a fool but he is logical and realistic with how he is handling things so far just try don't actually make him an idiot just for the sake of comedy you can always make him act it but alow us to see his thoughts explaining his plan or why he is doing it.
the legendary mechanic did this well if you are looking for references.
from chapter( 1 )through ( 5 )
3 years ago
4
GustPigey
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3 years ago
2
Axon_115
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the story is very good, the first chapter is kind of off putting but from there the story only gets better, i highly recommend it ...............................................................................
I didn't really think this was going to be a good novel but it surprised me and it was prob one of my favorite's i just hope that you don't drop it or ill be incredibly sad thank you.
3 years ago
1
Nightsking
Saw that the story didn't have many reviews yet so here I am.
Well I think it's a great story only downside is a bit slow updates and I would forget things in that time (have a bad memory). But overall great.
Also thought at somepoint his original world was avatar with all those weird animals species but since he's traveling to other worlds now I don't think so anymore. Still would be awesome
3 years ago
1
Daoistinc1G4
(PS story was honestly pretty good)
pretty much all I want to know is this story over to clarify I meant I don't see any new chapters popping out so I thought maybe got this continued I know a thing is set out in the episode pretty much I want to say is what is taking so long?
honestly i was a expecting this to be a one time read that i won't open again after the first chapter with how the mc was acting but from what i have seen after there is potential in this. he may act a fool but he is logical and realistic with how he is handling things so far just try don't actually make him an idiot just for the sake of comedy you can always make him act it but alow us to see his thoughts explaining his plan or why he is doing it. the legendary mechanic did this well if you are looking for references. from chapter( 1 )through ( 5 )
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the story is very good, the first chapter is kind of off putting but from there the story only gets better, i highly recommend it ...............................................................................
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I didn't really think this was going to be a good novel but it surprised me and it was prob one of my favorite's i just hope that you don't drop it or ill be incredibly sad thank you.
Saw that the story didn't have many reviews yet so here I am. Well I think it's a great story only downside is a bit slow updates and I would forget things in that time (have a bad memory). But overall great. Also thought at somepoint his original world was avatar with all those weird animals species but since he's traveling to other worlds now I don't think so anymore. Still would be awesome
(PS story was honestly pretty good) pretty much all I want to know is this story over to clarify I meant I don't see any new chapters popping out so I thought maybe got this continued I know a thing is set out in the episode pretty much I want to say is what is taking so long?