if I had to describe it it would be "boring",,,,,, literally it's damnachi,, the only difference would be bell's unique taste for elves,,, and riveria's infatuation at the beginning of the story,,,,, the same event,,,, the same skills just changing the name and adding a little extra,,,,,,, the same personality of the mc,,,, the same events only adding riveria in the mix,,,,, honestly for this I watch the anime better (translator)
3 years ago
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Jackadman
Pretty descriptive for a parody. nice plot changes and keeping the Mc with the qualities I like. Several typos throughout every chapter might wanna proof read
overall good fanfiction. quite enjoyable
if I had to describe it it would be "boring",,,,,, literally it's damnachi,, the only difference would be bell's unique taste for elves,,, and riveria's infatuation at the beginning of the story,,,,, the same event,,,, the same skills just changing the name and adding a little extra,,,,,,, the same personality of the mc,,,, the same events only adding riveria in the mix,,,,, honestly for this I watch the anime better (translator)
Pretty descriptive for a parody. nice plot changes and keeping the Mc with the qualities I like. Several typos throughout every chapter might wanna proof read overall good fanfiction. quite enjoyable