Starborne Warrior
I died, time and time again. A flower became my friend. I stole an AI and made mental love, I met an inebriated bird, and escaped from the golden tyrant above.
I found my true love, and never let her go. I was the dark of space and she the light that glowed.
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I was a simple human born in a world of blood. Then lay a flower, a vibrant blue flower, that changed it all and let my fate begin to unfurl. The finger of destiny began to curl as it sent me into the many worlds.
A warrior entranced by the power of blood and souls, fated to carry the stars.
I remember sitting on one as I sang my eternal song -
Oh, dust of the cosmos make me kin, smoke of celestials allow me to win.
Make me unbreakable, a child of the stars. Make me unshakable, A god of war - Mars.
I am starborne, I carry them all, I am unnamable, and I cannot fall.
This is a messy attempt at a modern "Journey to the West" or a grand scale adventure. A disgusting and hearty mix of genres. (Lapses are used to show different scenes or perspectives for small moments.) Majority of the story is in first person. A beast pretending to be human - he has no name. For the first chapter of the Dao itself states, 'only the unnamable is eternal'
I love 💘 your story because it is extremely extraordinary ❤ with well managed plot and characters. Your idea is unique keep it up auther. I m waiting for next chapters.
I saw this on one of the discussions in the forum, doing review swaps. It started to nicely that even I, who was a grammar geek, almost could not find any problem with your story in terms of syntax. The concept as well was there. Keep it up.
I take my hat off to your grammar, so far the story seems interesting so I hope you continue with the story, to anyone that reads this review give the book a try I bet you are going to like it
Amazing use of english and an even more amazing story. It's so easy to fall in love with this novel due to how well it is written by the author. The updates of chapters seem pretty stable so there are no complaints there and I feel that world building is spectacular. Well done author.
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The start was really intriguing, which made me wanna read further. The prose flows smmothly, no grammer issues which makes it even better. The MC is likeable, will have to wait for further advancement to see his character progression. The world-building looks good so far. Overall, a very good read and definitely a 9/10.
The story was captivating enough. There are some lapses here and there but nonetheless, it would still make up a great read for readers like me. :)
Excellent use of vocabulary. The author clearly has a command of the English language. Right from the start, the story's captivating and pulls you in. Great job so far!
Now, where do I start. First of all, the writing style is awesome. I read atleast 6 chapters without knowing it and trust me, i am really invested in the story. So keep it up, author
First of all, the author's writing skills are no joke. Even if you are not into the story you would still feel like reading it because of how beautifully it is written. I am not into such novels but I still give this one a try and I was very much satisfied with it. If you want to know why? Then go on and read it! Good Luck to the author~
Definitely not your usual read, but that's what makes this novel stand out. Love to see how it'll develop in the future, keep on writing man!