The Skill Creator's Journey Through The Multiverse

As a Shameless Author, I am giving myself full stars. This is a fanfic I have been planning for a while. I welcome all constructive comments, reviews, and suggestions. Help me make a story you will all love and enjoy.[img=recommend]

I have to say. It's interesting. Mc is op without a doubt but the story is good. But when he becomes too op what hwill happen will depend on the author. Either the story becomes diamond or waste. Hope you will continue to update and don't drop the fic.

It's overall pretty good so far, I like the concept of the story and how it's going right now, Can't wait to see how it's goes on forward with the upcoming chapters.

It's pretty interesting especially his power and the authors imagination, tho it's pretty fast paced but if u like stories like that this is for you

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I really liked the authors other fix so my expectations are high fot this one the idea is interesting i hope this it will not be abandon. Fill

Well written. Good story development. Fast paced, bordering on the acceptable level a bit, but still acceptable. The characters aren't really described all that well, but then again, we already got to know them quite well from the original works. Overall, I quite like it. It is well structured, follows the plot and focuses a lot more on the power-systems of various novels, which I'm all for.

keep writing this

Good and The New Concept is good too, not only that the story development and the upcoming world travelling is most anticipated Overall the Story is good, the grammar and choice of words are decent.