I'm Just a Simple Mortal With a Lovely Family

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I am quite impressed with the web novel that was created by the author. Story and the characters are good. Considering that English isn't the author's first language, I am impressed, learning a second language can be hard. The one thing that needs to improve on is the Synopsis. The synopsis tells you what this book is about and is something that catches your eyes. It makes the reader curious about the book. The first part of the Synopsis is great. The second part is the reason to improve. The reason why is don't write volume 1 in the sentence. Describe the story, background, character, timeline, plot, etc. But don't make it too detailed and don't make it a summary. keep the Synopsis moderate and simple while appealing to the audience. Overall, good job. -bombguy02yt

The story is very good. According to the author, they are a new writer, which, honestly is hard to believe. The writing quality is top tier and very descriptive, that of a skilled writer. Also, with the fact that English is not the author’s first language, it is insanely impressive. If you like stories with laid back and more relaxed setting but still has good pacing, I suggest you read this. It is very good and I have high hopes for this story. Do NOT drop it. Very well done, author!! 👏 -Kydul

I really liked the story because it shows us a very fun worldview. with the eyes of a baby. all this taking place in a different universe with a lot of mystery. I'm really curious to see how this story unfolds. It's been a lot of fun to read a chapter a day.