The Avatar in MHA
Author: Condemorll
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A young man die trying to save his childhood friend, but the world gives him a second chance, he got reborn in the world of MHA with the Avatar's abilities.
The story will not follow the normal timeline, the mc will be 26 when the canon starts, cause i want to try something new.
The story most likely will not have harem, most he will be in a relationship with 2 girls, who at the same time will be in love with each other.
It's my first time writing so maybe i'll make some mistakes in my grammar and the story may or may not be good, also i'm not a english speaker so i will try my best to improve in my writting.
The release will be one chapter every other day, but you may expect some daily chapter once in a while
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So author here, i Will be selfish and give myself a 5*, i don't have an editor and english is not my first language so i Will try my best, if you guys found any mistake let me know and i Hope you enjoy this.
there arent very many avatar related(not dropped) ff i genuinely hope you dont drop this and tbh this is the first ever mhaXavatar ff ive seen and ive been reading for like 2ish years so please dont drop it
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Very good start, for a non native English speaker, their language is pretty good with some spelling mistakes and wrong use of words but don’t overall effect it too much. MC’s powers are a good choice with a lot of room to expand. Author has clearly thought the fanfic through and is doing a good job! Advice, split up some of the paragraphs as they could be described as ‘monster’ paragraphs with how long they are. Additionally, you’ll learn with time, but the wrong use of words. Eg: Using loss instead of lose. Apart for the grammatical error it’s very good.