Amarillo's Pirate Adventure (One Piece SI)

it could have been good but the 1st chapter alone has more run on sentences then ive ever read in my life. the the author has to go and make the mc 100% handicapped in his next life. so all together i dont recommend unless you want a badly written ff

You know how I felt when reading chapter 1, at first MC give him a good perks then he make MC useless. You author sure good in making readers lost the desire to ready your ff.

I don't get the point of starting at level 0 getting +10 then -20 just start him in the world with no cheats. Plus, the traits he picks are all so the author has an excuse for plot later on. overall I don't see the point of this fanfic

The story was okintil the Fishman ark. Garp drilled into him not to give up without trying and he swore to it. But the second he heard about the Fishman he through fighting out the window. Plus he like the ultimate slave, unable to resist or fight back from the simplest orders and that's the deal breaker for me so I dropped.

It could of been worse but still bad choice of traits, an then theirs the negative traits MC has to pick. Basically nerfing the already bad traits MC choose. I can already tell I won't like this novel from chapter 1.

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Great start, but unneeded characther nerfing and constant switching of the Mc's personlaity and goals, make what would be an interesting story overall a major dissaponotment. 10/10 would not recommend

honestly i was pumped when i realised there are 2 more novels from the author of will of gil and was planning to support your patreon to read more content but now i kinda gave up. the disappointment was immeasurable when i read the first chapter of this novel.

everything was great till you nerfed your mc for the sake of plot, I like your other stories(will of gill). people dropped boruto as they nerfed naruto even tho they had a huge fan following, so I don't people are fan of nerfed mc...but hey maybe he will get stronger in the future(I knw) but still I couldn't bring myself to read after chapter 36 or 37.

I am tired and can't properly write a review and is just writing this to full in the words. I'm about to sleep so goodnyt ya'll. Just saying that this book is great and you should totally give it a read. The flow of the story is great, it doesn't feel robotic. Nyt nyt bye bye byers

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