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3 years ago
7
Lukeskydrinker
Join to the dark side,READER
WE HAVE COOCKIES[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
This story has a lot of potential! you can polish your writing more but other than that your story is solid! I await the interaction between the imperials and the denizen of Nazarick and the shenanigans that Palpatine will cause in the future! [img=recommend]
3 years ago
3
WintyLP
Starwars
3 years ago
3
KingPumpkin3
Love it keep it up it has so much potential
2 years ago
1
nathan_playzz
Overall from reading the first chapter I can say that this story has a very good potential!!! I really look forward to the ineractions between the empire and Nazarick.
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3 years ago
1
Reitsuki77
Nice book, the idea of using a OC character that is from the same world like Ainz not knowing anything about the Overlord story will be nice to watch as his empire rises
3 years ago
1
Suraj_Nishad_8693
why there is only one chapter i need more
i need more plz[img=update]
you can't make such a interesting star and just stop at that
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a year ago
0
Dremer_Dragna
Надеюсь на скорейшее продолжения.
Надеюсь на скорейшее продолжения.
Надеюсь на скорейшее продолжения.
Надеюсь на скорейшее продолжения.
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I like it........................ ...............I like it........................ ...............I like it........................ ...............I like it........................ ...............I like it........................ ...............I like it........................ ...............I like it........................ ...............I like it........................ ...............
Join to the dark side,READER WE HAVE COOCKIES[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
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This story has a lot of potential! you can polish your writing more but other than that your story is solid! I await the interaction between the imperials and the denizen of Nazarick and the shenanigans that Palpatine will cause in the future! [img=recommend]
Starwars
Love it keep it up it has so much potential
Overall from reading the first chapter I can say that this story has a very good potential!!! I really look forward to the ineractions between the empire and Nazarick.
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Take my power stones kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkajjakakakakakakakakakakkakakakakakakakakakakakakkaakakkakahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhhahahaha
Nice book, the idea of using a OC character that is from the same world like Ainz not knowing anything about the Overlord story will be nice to watch as his empire rises
why there is only one chapter i need more i need more plz[img=update] you can't make such a interesting star and just stop at that i need more i need more i need more i need more i need more i need more i need more
Надеюсь на скорейшее продолжения. Надеюсь на скорейшее продолжения. Надеюсь на скорейшее продолжения. Надеюсь на скорейшее продолжения. Долбанные 140 символов