Caged With A Vampire
(Warning: Mature content)
She is dreadful and has no mercy. She isn't scared of anything, even death is scared of her.
But, the ever daring man dared to look at her, straight at her piercing eyes. Something no one has ever done.
Well, she is the QUEEN of her territory and he is the KING TO TAME HER.
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To get his sister back from the hands of the evil woman who had kidnapped her, Darren Vladimir is ready to do anything even thought it means putting his life on the life. But it wouldn't go easy as thought as she is not one to please. They made a deal.....
A deal with consequences if broken.
"You will replace your sister and become my slave, and I will give her back to you..... If this deal is breached, the person you love the most will have to DIE"
"Yes I accept..... Just let my sister go."
A dangerous deal.....
But the famous arrogant researcher, Darren Vladimir, has a different plan in mind.
The deal might backfire and he was ready for it......
He is going to TAME HER, the forest vampire and send her to hell where she belong.
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Ambrosia drew closer and raised his jaw using her middle fingers, staring at his grey orbs, never taking her eyes off or blinking away. The man was determined. He raised a corner of his lips, smiling at her lopsidedly. He wasn't blinking away too but staring at the gorgeous but cold woman who leaned so close to him.
"Are you falling for me already?" he asked.
She raised a brow at the sudden question but her face went back to her usual deadpan state. "I see you are determined......Fine then, I give you fourteen days. Fourteen days to get me on your bed. If after the fourteenth day, and nothing happened between us, then I might end up punishing you severally. A punishment you will never forget."
His smile broadened, "Fine then, but if after that fourteenth day, I succeed, you will also be punished."
She smiled and moved back, "You are crazy, aren't you?" she said staring at him. "Fine then, let's make that part of our deal."
I'm not going to lie to you and tell you this is the most magnificent thing to ever be created in this world. Honestly, this is a read you can pick up when you're bored and slowly grow to love. Only complaint is the inappropriate use of commas in certain areas. Characters could use a bit more emotion but it's not too much of a deal breaker. A little bit of editing could go a long way.
I started reading this and before I knew it, I was out of chapters! The opening hook is acceptable, introduces the main character and gets the reader ready for the rest of the story. Enjoying the world that this author is building. Interesting angle on the character tropes as well. Adding to library and very excited to see more. Please keep going!
This book is a 10/10! I was so interested and hooked that I didn't even realized when I finished reading all the 17 chapters . Will be looking forward to it! !
The choice of vocabulary and the expressions are pitch perfect. Everything has been elaborately described that you don't miss anything. The story development is nice so far and it kept me hooked since it's so interesting! Not only can you understand the characters' way of thinking from text, the world background is also easy to imagine because of the clear usage of words. I like your way of writing author, keep it up!😊
You have to set the scene better. I don't feel how evil the vampire queen is. Also you didn't clarify who she wanted to kill and why? You have the talent now try to develop it
Filled with so many mysteries and it just pulls one in. I have read the first chapter of it, and it interested me to read more of it . the writing style of the author is superb.
Interesting read: a fascinating story that moves at a steady pace. So many twists and turns and more undoubtedly to come. Enough to keep the readers on their toes and wanting more. From Review swap.
Ambrosia sounds bad but somehow i like her. Filled with mysteries and just loving it from word go. Looking forward to see what will happen to her and the pure bloods.
The story is smooth and easy to read, although I find a bit of the problem where I can't tell how evil the vampire queen is, I just don't feel it much.
Smooth and easy read. From the onset, you can even picture the world background. The plot is interesting enough to get you hooked onto it as well. It's got some great potential
Interesting story. Characters and chapters even the storyline is well describe and written. It always the girl sacrificing for her family even in dramas. It intriguing to see a man sacrifice for his family. Looking forward for updates.
I think this is a very unique story with a good setting, it makes me want to read more to know what happened. I always see the girl sacrificing for her brother or her father. It nice to see a man do that for once
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Am certainly giving this book a five-star. one thing I love about this book is the characterization structure. the author describes every one of the characters perfectly from their emotions to the action pack. keep up the good work author
This novel is a good read. At first, I find it a little slow but with each passing second it was able to grip me. I can see great potential in the novel, as well as hard work of the author. All the best!