Reborn as Rhaenyra's Twin - (House of the Dragon)

Slow going, no character development, mc is as incompetent and childish as Naruto, he doesn’t have a backbone, and lastly 90% of this fic is him talking about painting

Author please, I beg of you, have a good update rate, I’m desperate for a actual House of the Dragon fic that updates decently and yours has a great idea.

I don't know why this had so high ratings.. but the one reason enough to drop this fic that is MC, he is even worse than Japanese Beta, doesn't had a backbone and just keeps talking paintings. Like wt. f

I ABSSOLUTELY ADORE THIS STORY I HAVE BUT ONE HIMBLE REQUEST AUTHOR.… NO HAREM thats all teheee This story is amazing however I would refrain from havin Alicent as endgame I think many of us adore the angst derived by Alicents betrayal with viserys and may even could be used as a tension point with viserys as he married not only his children’ best friend but someone he knows his son my be have feelings for but chooses her to avoid his responsibilities with the Velaryon Food for thought if you want any of these ideas

and a fanfic that the more you read the less interesting it becomes, this fanfic doesn't seem like it takes place in the world of the dragon's house

suspiciously their are no comments with less that 4 star . there are always people who will dislike or even hate a fic no matter how good it is . for the records this fic isn't that good either it average u can say interesting idea , a somewhat good plot , poor execution and language lack of details .

Easily worst ff about HotD ff. Nothing but painting and it's terminology with a super lengthy explanation. MC has personality less interesting than a road side stone 🪨. Politics and marshal training be damned. He didn't bother to check Demon or put him six feet under or burn him with dragon fire or assassinate him ASAP. No push for reform. He and his painting no push to stop the dance. He must already court the high tower wrench of his sister, He is in every way worse than his father. His plot armour is so tick otherwise he might slip on the stairs and break his neck. Waste of time and hair (as you shall pull out hairs with frustration).

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If friend Nissan also reincarnates, it will spoil the story, I hope something so silly doesn't happen bery gud ............................................

Are you gonna give this fanfic a try? It has a lot of potential. (enjdnjdinwiniendieneudedneuduedneuduedueduednueduedundundneudneudnudneunduenduedn)

I couldn't read anymore, it was boring. MC only interested in art and he complains sooo much and does the most random shit. and him being reincarnated doesn't mean anything

nah i was wrong this truly Is not whort it

too vague of a plot, you are writing in puzzles

I thought this would be a decent read and im sure it is for some, but for me this was a waste of time, you never know whos POV your reading until the end of the chapter which confuses everything, its more about art than running a kingdom. not for me, thanks anyway though