The story great. The plot is OK but still needs improvement. Anyways keep it up your book will get there someday.....................................
3 years ago
1
Eleina_jossy
This is getting alot better than last time I was here. I would really recommend this novel to everyone... Good job............................................
3 years ago
1
That_awkard_reader
Well I won't say it's perfect but it's Ok. Keep it up and you'll be good in no time...............
....... Love the chapters..............................
3 years ago
1
Luna_chan346
Wow for someone new this is very impressive and I would totally recommend. Although there are some repetitive words tho............ But good job
3 years ago
1
Sirdox_The_gamer
This is a nice story. It's still not perfect but it's really good. Keep it up and you have my support...................................
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3 years ago
1
Mo_Derie
This is fantastic stuff we'll written and the story is freaking amazing this is really great stuff coz of the creativity and existence of the story
3 years ago
1
Pra_Ise
Amazing story🥰........
Cant wait for the next chapter😙.......
I really love it so im giving you 5 stars ⭐️
Sophie is still my favorite🥰
3 years ago
1
Angellily20
This is my new novel...... Hope you all like it and pls rate and tell me what you think so I can make some changes😅..........I'm new to writing on this app
............... Thanks for reading
3 years ago
1
DaoistTABFVF
............Really great stuff you got here...am amazed 😗.. can't wait for the next chapters..ama keep anticipating and super hyped for more of this
3 years ago
1
Francis_John_8433
Nice story, love the characters especially Sophie, wish we could get an in-depth view into the mystery portrayed in the stories, but overall I'll give it 5 stars. Hope to see more chapters Rolling in.
3 years ago
1
Flashmaru
Well developed story, perfect world description and good character development. Hope this continues. I can't wait for more chapters[img=recommend]
The story great. The plot is OK but still needs improvement. Anyways keep it up your book will get there someday.....................................
This is getting alot better than last time I was here. I would really recommend this novel to everyone... Good job............................................
Well I won't say it's perfect but it's Ok. Keep it up and you'll be good in no time............... ....... Love the chapters..............................
Wow for someone new this is very impressive and I would totally recommend. Although there are some repetitive words tho............ But good job
This is a nice story. It's still not perfect but it's really good. Keep it up and you have my support................................... ......
This is fantastic stuff we'll written and the story is freaking amazing this is really great stuff coz of the creativity and existence of the story
Amazing story🥰........ Cant wait for the next chapter😙....... I really love it so im giving you 5 stars ⭐️ Sophie is still my favorite🥰
This is my new novel...... Hope you all like it and pls rate and tell me what you think so I can make some changes😅..........I'm new to writing on this app ............... Thanks for reading
............Really great stuff you got here...am amazed 😗.. can't wait for the next chapters..ama keep anticipating and super hyped for more of this
Nice story, love the characters especially Sophie, wish we could get an in-depth view into the mystery portrayed in the stories, but overall I'll give it 5 stars. Hope to see more chapters Rolling in.
Well developed story, perfect world description and good character development. Hope this continues. I can't wait for more chapters[img=recommend]