Hinata's Sensual Adventure
This tale almost shadows the canon version of the series. But I have added new scenes and scenarios to better capture the sole objective of this story, which is depict more character development and romance between Naruto and Hinata.
Both characters have been given a power boost. Naruto is also smarter, as my other aim was for him to discover the answer to the question that both Nagato and Jiraiya sought: how do you end the cycle of hatred and revenge that plagues the shinobi world and seize true peace?
In the first chapter, Hinata decided to pay Naruto a visit - to express her gratitude for the protection she received on the battlefield. But Cupid apparently had other plans.
Hinata ended up giving her crush more than what she bargained for; more than the gourmet breakfast she prepared for him. But, subconsciously, in a quiet corner of her mind, had this development not been what she really craved?
Yum!
Ok I really like the idea of seeing the romance between canon characters just something in the chapter title im confused about does kurama fall in love with hinata too as like a duel personality of naruto? just curious haven’t read it yet but it’s interesting either way
3 chapters in and the story as well as the quality of writing is pretty good, the only thing I absolutely hate is when the author writes in all caps. This is unnecessary and hard to read whenever I see it.
wish I could give more than 5 stars for writing quality and updating stability... Best Writing I've seen in fanfic so far.. The story is nice and its slow place and there is a lot of words...
The story is too slow paced..and there is not much imagination but. but... the writing quality is off the charts I am reading jusg for the Authors writing and not his story at this point. eavh paragraph is lile a frighin poem