Gaara: The Guardian of Sand

I like the story, I always felt that Gaara had a lot of wasted potential in Naruto. So it nice to see a story involving his development which a great storyline. Also when are you going to update your other stories. It been 10 months since you updated Reborn Saiyan God Vegeta and I excited to see what happens next.

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The writing quality is good the story development is at the early stages so it gets 1 star. the character design is a 3, with not too much depth, and the updates are very slow so 1 star The world background is Naruto so it is not a novel that needs any effort to do a world background. So In total, it's a 3. I don't think that you portrayed Rasa right. the love interest if it is shinsuki is kinda cliche and very bland and generally speaking as a gaara fan fic it's meh it could be better but it's alright.