DC: DON'T UTTER A WORD

The Name cornbringer is just enough for 5 stars. Btw are Inhumans going to be there as well?. I am so happy to post this. every fiber of my body worships cornbringer-sama. Love you. You are super sexy by the way even though I never met you. would really appreciate if you coment a "hi"

The reason for 5 stars? Well, it's Cornbringer. Nuff said...................................................................................

Its CORNBRINGER Is gonna be good . . . . .

Mediocre is the best I can describe it. Nothing differs from canon as it is a slight rehash of those events with similar outcomes. My main issue is how the author wrote this. The MC's memories are faulty at the most convenient of times. Where ROB has taken his long term memory and butchered it until the plot calls for it to become relevant. So we get arcs where the MC just 'remembers' what the big secret is through some hard core plot armor leading the way. So we are left in the dark concerning his actions until he rediscovers his 'missing' memory, I mean plot points where he no longer stumbles in the dark. Then we have the romantic interest who is 'raven', but it doesn't develop into anything as of c119. Where our MC will proceed to go full edgy mode with her wanting to tag along. However, this could've been avoided with a simple explanation of his future knowledge that would've prevented this disaster. But, I forgot the MC got some brain issues as the author loves his soap opera. Also did I forget that foreshadowing of deathstroke is way to obvious? Its almost as if the author wants the MC to join the villains at this stage. Not even trying to hide it as a an igneous alternative. Since we had over 20chps of batman going over this 'betrayal' plan in great detail. In other words, I think this review doesn't deserve a spoiler as everything written is too blatant to be left wondering of how the plot would unfold.

5 for writing quality and stability of updates, 3 for everything else.....its getting boring, like I know it's supposed to be a slow fic and I respect that but with locked memories trope + powers too dangerous to actually be used it just kinda feels like the MC is an inferior batman.....literally a chipmunk with magic could wipe the floor with him and it's been a 100 chapters. It would've been fine if the slice of life moments in between were good but the best joke so far has been Oliver Queen's mustache so this.....this just not it. I'd honestly rather you give this up and maybe work on the twilight: venom fic or something, at least that seems interesting.

stability and quality is good but its boring asf.

I don't understand why the rating is so high. It has potential but the author makes the story very boring. The main character is a brat and he's a coward, which makes it that much harder to read.

Reveal Spoiler

The main character is legitimately the worst apart of the book. Take all the frustrations you auve with regular superheroes, add a good dash of constant moping and self doubt, and you'd have him.Also, it's dropped, so that's an even lower rating. At least the DC world is accurate enough.

Hah as always smooth hero boy with big sister and boring asf..I saw the ratings High so i came but alas it's your little Superboy with depression who can't even control his powers

Character is useless and don't understand anything. He is always afraid

A bit meh. This story is more about psychology than super heroes. We're not following an insert with the powers of Black Bolt dealing with crime in DC in an OP way. We're following a dude that deals with being incredible depressed due to having the powers of Black Bolt and how he grows up while never using them. It would be better to describe this fic as an insert with minor super strength and resistance that is dealing with depression...in DC.

Overall, it was very frustrating. You give a guy an OP powerset and then feed him power piece meal. That along with thier being NOTHING else to this novel then fighting bad guys leaves alot of emptiness in the plot area.Then this is written like a mystery novel or should have been if you wanted to write a Dark Kinght style fanfic. But there is no real mystery. No, who done it. Last but not least, why are you modeling someone who is supposed to be as strong as Superman off batman. Makes no sense. I came for someone with the powers of Black Bolt, but what i got was a batman knock-off.

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