While the character interactions are well-developed, the pacing of the story could be more balanced, as some scenes feel slower than necessary. Additionally, expanding on world-building details could enhance immersion. Strengthening the main plot’s direction will also help keep readers more invested in long-term developments.
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Okaebisama
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Shehu_Adam
Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
if you open fro that you can message the expert to thank better on Discord @Franklusi0805 and then tell them i commend for you?
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While the character interactions are well-developed, the pacing of the story could be more balanced, as some scenes feel slower than necessary. Additionally, expanding on world-building details could enhance immersion. Strengthening the main plot’s direction will also help keep readers more invested in long-term developments.
Reveal Spoiler
Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ? if you open fro that you can message the expert to thank better on Discord @Franklusi0805 and then tell them i commend for you?