While the character interactions are well-developed, the pacing of the story could be more balanced, as some scenes feel slower than necessary. Additionally, expanding on world-building details could enhance immersion. Strengthening the main plot’s direction will also help keep readers more invested in long-term developments.
4 months ago
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Starpreacher
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3 years ago
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Ichigoberry224
I Was Reincarnated Into a World Where I Was the Side Character offers a fresh perspective on the isekai genre by spotlighting a protagonist who finds themselves not as the hero, but as a side character in a world reminiscent of their own. I know this kind of story isn't particularly rare, but I really liked how the writer poured their soul into each character.
PS: Please add more interactions between each of the heroines. seeing their relationships develop further would make the story even more engaging.
While the character interactions are well-developed, the pacing of the story could be more balanced, as some scenes feel slower than necessary. Additionally, expanding on world-building details could enhance immersion. Strengthening the main plot’s direction will also help keep readers more invested in long-term developments.
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I Was Reincarnated Into a World Where I Was the Side Character offers a fresh perspective on the isekai genre by spotlighting a protagonist who finds themselves not as the hero, but as a side character in a world reminiscent of their own. I know this kind of story isn't particularly rare, but I really liked how the writer poured their soul into each character. PS: Please add more interactions between each of the heroines. seeing their relationships develop further would make the story even more engaging.
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