Galatea: The Last Whisperer
When the last whisperer is murdered, the fate of Athyria hangs in the balance. But a glimmer of hope arises in the form of a young girl, Galatea, who discovers that she has the ability to see and communicate with the fayes of Aelfrey. Suddenly, she finds herself thrust into the role of the new whisperer, with the weight of an entire land on her shoulders.
Gala quickly learns that she cannot do this alone. With the help of the stern commander in chief, Alvaro, the two set out to rediscover the lost dimensions and reunite Athyria under the guidance of their sacred goddess, Dylareia. But they soon realize that they are not the only ones with an interest in this journey.
As they journey through the different dimensions, Gala and Alvaro encounter unexpected allies and foes, each with their own agendas and secrets. But as their journey progresses, Gala begins to suspect that the true enemy may be closer than they ever imagined.
As she grapples with her newfound power and the responsibility it brings, she must also navigate the complex relationships and intricate politics of the different beings of Athyria. Can she rise to the occasion and fulfill the prophecy, or is Athyria doomed to remain divided forever?
This is a good start to a fantasy epic. The premise is interesting and I am looking forward to the plot opening up. If I must be critical, the text could be put through light proofreading. Otherwise it is fabulous and a good read.
The world-building is great. More curious to know the journey and secrets of the Gala. Will she be able to return back to the human world? I could even imagine the fantasy land in my mind while reading the story. Wonderful work. Hoping to see more chapters soon. Good work author!!
This story is quite different from most of the other fantasy books out there. It feels warm and homely. The female lead is endearing and it almost makes you care for her right from the first chapter. If I'm being honest, there's one tiny improvement that I'd like to suggest. The characters can use some more physical descriptions so that readers can better visualise them. Overall, this is a heartwarming book, perfect for relaxation. The world feels enchanting and lively, and the female lead fits in perfectly.
The synopsis itself is so captivating...🤩
This story was actually recommended to me by my author friend KavMan. I didnt really think much of it but now that i've read it even though just a few chapters, i agree with Kavman. This story is a killer, totally recommended
I love the intro to the story and the names used in the story by the author 🧚♀️🧚♀️🧚♀️😻😻😻 cant wait to read the entire story💗💗💗💗
I like how you create your story. I like how you weave your words. You're one of the writers who can make me visualize the world the characters are living in. Hopefully you'll continue writing on, you have the talent for it. There will be challenges but with talents like yours, you'll be able to overcome them. ☺️
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Hmm, this story is one of the best fantasy books i've read. The world building, character development, grammar...basically everything about it is unique. In four words, this book is a masterpiece.
I find your plot really good, especially since I like to highlight a heroine. Overall, the writing is impeccable and quite light it's interesting. I will continue to read, I like this style of writing😸
love this book. One of the best fantasy books I have read. I hope it gets more and more views. one thing I like about it is the title. GALATEA
You are very good at writing you just show up your talent, All of these you can conquer all your dreams that you are dreaming of. And I am so happy for you. Thanks
Although there was a lot of reputations to the main characters name that could be less often, the story is well thought out and good grammar which is a plus for me. I look forward to seeing where the story goes as I read more. Good job author.
The fantasy setting of this masterpiece is very amazing on its own. I can sense no major flaw in it. Hopefully you will gain experience in the future to make this book even better. The characters are brilliantly built, and as an author I can see the hard work you put into it. Well Done, and Nice Job!
This is a perfect book. English is proper with no grammatical mistakes. I absolutely liked how the author described the magical elements in this book.
Wow... Simply put, this story is amazing. Well written with good grammar, every paragraph is understandable. Description is vivid and world design is superb. I already knew from the start that Gala was a special girl and I can't wait to see what she is and her impacts. Kudos to you, author. Highly recommended.