Yakuza Lady In Another World

Let me explain once again, at first I thought this was not interesting, this is just ordinary because there are too many time passes but the longer the novel gets more epic, I'm serious, you have to try.

I like this story so I'll recommend it to those who are looking for a good yuri fic that also has a decent enough plot. It's not all mindless and I like how the author is taking the time in establishing roles.

5 out of 5. The story is really good, and I like all the characters and the entire flow of it all. It is also really nice to see an actually good and smart main character. Most plot charters are just bumbling dumasses…

I'm Big fan of Yakuza Theme, because of the Martial Arts battles or just the fighting scene in general that are presented, so I won't beat around the bush and give it a 5 stars every time I see a Yakuza themed novel hahaha.

Overall everything is good, but the character development is still lacking, so please be more detailed for the character design part, such as whether he is young or old, what his hair looks like, so the reader can imagine the character.

No Idea why there are so many 5 star reviews it's pretty bad. The english is acceptable if you're used to webnovels quality. If you aren't, you won't be able to read this. You could probably read it if you're able to turn of your brain and avoid thinking about the stuff that happens but I can't do that. anyway there was no logic involved in writing this but it's not the worst I've ever seen and there are frequent updates so 2.2/5

The writing quality is bad and doesn’t tell us what she is thinking and why she makes some decisions. There is also a ton of plot hole in the story like why is she so powerful as soon as she gets summoned with no knowledge of magic.

Hmm.. for a first book I guess it’s average. The writing quality will need majot improving. The characters are likable but the author lacks in giving them emotions and personality. World building is generic, very unoriginal. Needs improving, a lot of improving.

Because this novel I'm motivated to make a novel about the reincarnated Yakuza too, Kiryuu-chan xD. I want to make Kiryuu from Yakuza game reincarnated hahaha.

1: there to much plot holes 2: she is overpower for no real reason 3: the story is to rushed with no real discreption 4: the Yakuza are moive Yakuza not real one because if it was real the mc would have been used easily 5: Honstly if u explain most of the stuf then most these things won’t be promblem Let me remind people I read to chapter 1-3 this dose not summarize the story and could possibly be better It just did not hook me in and I judge to fast

As far as I read from chapters 1-20, it's interesting, there is indeed a plot hole but I don't care much about that, I won't comment on grammar or anything like that, and Hannya focuses on stories'. the story presented is very interesting, but sounds a little stiff, it needs a detailed explanation of the characters and the world's background, that reviews from me.

The story is okay, I can still understand your writing, even though there are some mistakes, it's clear that your mistakes, whether it's in the grammar or something else, are decreasing in each chapter, keep it up.

I honestly like the story and I can say for sure the author is reading mookhyang dark lady and maybe a big fan still the story it's like skipping many details but it's still good keep up👍👍

I want to read it but the ability like thing she does or whatever like dragon style or amt is like not natural when coming from earth which is not in any way able to control some kind of supernatural power so to me its like giving the mc a power up without a story behind it like the yakuza have some secret body type or whatever and that makes them able to control fire and punch someone so hard to let them fly to the wall I don't like this kind of power up so 2/5