Lucian, a big fan of anime and manga, was hit by a truck while walking across a road after going to the shop. When he woke up, he was in a forest with dead bodies all around him. To his right was a crying baby boy, and an old man was walking towards them both.
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Always wanted a ff about this manga and please dont disappoint MC and Shins “parents” by making this a harem. And if you do decide to do harem atleast put down a warning comment here before I or any other reader get invested
Summary: Watch the anime or read the manga, it's better than reading this, nothing changes anyway so it doesn't matter.
it's good it has proper build up and some twist which is great and it has proper dialogue good pacing and of course a likeable MC but i hope he doesn't go after Sicily but with maria as his lover. It also have good grammar and it's not confusing to read which in some fanfic cases are
In the first place, your story is the same as the original and your mc has no relevance since he only copies and chases the original protagonist everywhere. stop showing shin and we all know his story and we don't care and stop acting like the main character his reactions are stupid and childish for an adult man or with some neurons I like harems but I know it's hard to write one that doesn't look like cheap raunchy fantasy so good choice with just one partner In short, I appreciate the potential of your work, so I will give you 5 stars until you have more chapters.
i just realize another the most taboo thing when writing fanfic that is copy the protagonis character. yeah, this fanfic MC copy shin character, the beginning of chapter is when you build MC character, but author just copy shin character, even their reaction is the same.. and honestly MC magic is TRASH! there is no creativity, author just use normal magic that just so boring, when MC can fuse his elemental magic..
Look, I don't regret saying this, but this story is fit only for Wattpad.
It's just a copy of the original. The only thing the author changed is 'Shin said' to 'Shin and Lucien said.' Other than that it's basically a copy of the original, only with worse grammar...
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just no. quality: 1 nothing to say just 1. development: 1 its the exact same as the anime. not 1 thing has changed even slightly. character: 0 if possible the mc is just a copy of shin, but with no thoughts of his own. he just copies everything shin says and we don't see him with any form of sentience he's like a lifeless object, just there to make a fanfic. updates: 1 nothing to say. background: 1 nothing to say.
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Following the original story no new elements except the MC
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Trash, little to no originality. This story is just cannon with extra steps. The mc knows of the plot and everything but acts like he knows nothing that or even the author forgot that the mc knows. Literal garbage I would recommend reading the manga or watching the anime instead of reading this since this is basicaly cannon with an extra extra