This story is about a young girl who was normal but didn't wanted to be cause of the things she was facing in her life she dreamed to be a supernatural detective and also a monster but in a good way she wanted to make people respect her but her life had something else for her.
One something happened which changed her life totally she got supernatural powers but along with the powers she also made some big enemies.
So let's see if she would be able to face the problems and become more stronger or she will have to die like that?
It's better than before. It think you should write a little bit more of it overall it was good and I have to say you have improved a lot
Can be more better but was very good can't wait for part 4 The characters are very exciting and can't wait to find out the male lead's name and personality The way you write about anything character and describe their feature that is heart touching and you have improved a lot since your first novel