Former Interstellar Mercenary In Urban Cultivation World

Former Interstellar Mercenary In Urban Cultivation World

Fantasy881 Chapters1.5M Views
Author: Peerless_CucumberX
4.53
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Amalia, the Former Interstellar Mercenary died on mission. She was transmigrated into Urban Cultivation World and become the "sacrifice" of the Rodriguez family.



On her way of revenge, she meet a strange man who asked her about "White Rabbit". She though that would be the last time she meet him but never did she know that destiny would bring them together in unexpected way!



This was the story how Amalia rise from just small "sacrifice" in the Urban Cultivation World into a Bigshoot of the Three Realms!

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Peerless_CucumberX
Peerless_CucumberX

There's no author who doesn't like their novel!

a year ago
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Random_Foxs
Random_Foxs

Read up to Chapter 100 so far and enjoy the story as a whole. The only issue is the amount of pronouns that are used incorrectly. This issue has become more obvious as I approached Chapter 100, and it disturbs the flow of the story. Hopefully, the author fixes this as having to correct the pronouns in my head every time Amalia is referred to as "he" or another character's gender seemingly changes, makes reading difficult. Also, if possible, it would be nice to have a constant update of Amalia's cultivation process rather than just knowing that she's become stronger. Like telling us when she's become the next level (not anything major though)

9 months ago
13
Moonlight_63
Moonlight_63

From the summary, it looks like the book needed to be proofread for grammatical errors. Too distracting.

10 months ago
11
Rubis2020
Rubis2020

I am totally enjoyimg the story. Can the book go for a good edit? Yes. But overall the author is doing a great job. I totally can’t wait to read the next chapter.

9 months ago
5
Snorlax777
Snorlax777

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a year ago
4
C11
C11

There may be a slight writing problem.. But the Story & Characters are interesting enough to keep you hooked.. 🆒

5 months ago
1
DaoistnSJLY3
DaoistnSJLY3

Great story! Only issue is the grammar.

2 months ago
0
Swamp_Rat
Swamp_Rat

An absolutely fantastic story! Yes, the pronouns and grammar aren’t great but they aren’t bad enough to make the reading too difficult. I highly recommend this because of the great characters & story line. A really enjoyable read!

2 months ago
0
BlackRoger
BlackRoger

A decent Cultivation story with interesting characters and world building. Unfortunately, the writing quality prevents it from reaching its full potential. Can still be a fun read if you don't set your expectations too high

2 months ago
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DaoistnSJLY3
DaoistnSJLY3

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7 months ago
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Nivz24
Nivz24

synopsis is good, progress of the story is very slow. . don't know if it's worth per chapter, is the update regularly uploaded or took to long for a new one? if it is, this story might be forgotten. . it's a pity though, seems promising,

8 months ago
0
esperomejorar
esperomejorar

el que hizo la sinopsis es noob. . .

10 months ago
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GerryCdL
GerryCdL

........................................

10 months ago
0
Team_Leader_Shen
Team_Leader_Shen

Two chapter a day it's not enough author! Please, update new chapter more!

a year ago
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mischa_1997
mischa_1997

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a year ago
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