MMORPG: Evolution: A new game

The story's world-building is good, the grammar is acceptable since it's not the author's first language and I imagine this story has good potential as the author is definitely dedicated.

Some words during descriptions being repeated a little too often, e.g.; Was in the capital of the New World Order. The capital of the New World Order was called New Hope in honor of the New World Order... One paragraph had the descriptor mentioned 6 times. Mix up the sentences a little, maybe shrink it and it would be great. :] The story is interesting but a lot of information to digest in the early chapters. Looking forward to more!

It's looking good so far, and while the author's first language is not English they are doing quite well. This has plenty of potential with the first three chapters at the time of this review, looking forward to more.

If youre the type that likes reading VR related stories then try this out. There are some errors in grammars but it is still understandable. Also the Author's native language is not english. The story itself is original. Having no binding class will let characters choose what's really useful or what they want to play.

That was a fun reading. I've read one or two mmorpg books, although gaming genre is not my type, but this is enjoyable 👍🏻

Currently I have got to try new books in difderent kind of genres which I had never tried before. Yours also in that group. Yet, when I was trying out this I realised that soon I will get iterrsted in this genre too.. Thanks to you author, I am saying. Actually, honestly saying my opinion. In love with this. Hope to continue since it's a new experience for me. So for now, I am telling you author please keep going.. I will recommend this to my frieds, so they could read this too. Keep going author. This work should be continue for the sake of us. ❤️❤️❤️🍭

Although it's my first time reading a book in this genre, I must say you portrayed all descriptions accurately. The world background, the game description and inside the game everything seems real. Nice work author. Keep up the good work.

The concept of the story is good...I like the world-building and feature description of the game.....the characters are intriguing and I'm curious how they developed their abilities.... keep it up.

If you're the type that likes reading VR-related stories then try tis novel out, if not you are missing out on something. Your world build is great, and so are the characters, there are some grammar errors in the novel, but they are only small and can happen to anyone. Overall, this is a 4.5/5, I would recommend this novel to anyone who likes Video Games Novels :)

At this point it seems like a good novel, the descriptions of the scenes are developed and it has interesting elements.

The plot is amazing and the events are written beautifully, I can read this story till the end as it totally stood up to my taste, just little polishing and you're all set, great work ❤️❤️❤️

The world structure of the story is very broad, and it keeps me invested in the story as I read. The writing quality is fine so far, and the development continues to immerse me.

Even though there are a lot of stories in this genre but this one is unique of them all, the author has done a good job in describing everything, best of luck with writing further~~

Amazing world building concept and very well written, I liked everything about this story and looking forward to more chapters, great work 💖💖💖💖