DxD: Child of Destiny

This senior brother has not read this fine piece of work as of yet, but the Anti-harem sect is here to formally invite you to join our ranks, and continue doing the lord's work! Good day, we hope to see more of you in the future!

I really like the concept of Bianka in DxD but there's so many problems in this fic even though I read only five chapters. First the grammar and spelling, not to bash the Author but it's horrible, that I could barely read without getting a headache. Second, is the way the Author describe the characters, I can imagine the basic looks like blonde hair etc, but again the Author didn't put height or anything that further describes the characters. Third, the way the Author is writing is far too dry, like when the Bianka was birthed all the Author did was put the dialogue and slap the characters name there, not even describing how the characters feel. So this book is written by an amateur writer (again not being mean or something merely stating facts) The Author has a long way to go to be able to write a decent fic but that's alright.

It's an interesting story, mainly because it mixes DxD and Honkai, I think the only thing I didn't like very much was the fast pace that things develop.

To be perfectly honest I can’t wait to see how this story plays out. I hope for more chapters soon. Please don’t drop because so far your first 2 chapters are good,.