Game of Thrones: Lord of the Seven Seas

It's like author have no idea how medieval world works. My review may be "wrong" because I only managed to read ten chapters

Rating distribution — 3,3,2,4,3 I mainly disliked the story for naivety and softness of MC. He isn't suitable for GOT as his mindset and personality is too kind. And from experience I know the story will change itself to accomodate the MC not the other way around. So you can safely say it won't give the GOT vibe.

Thus is a very interesting story. Starting way before the game of thrones TV series time line since MC is the brother of the father of the original cast, he also has some powers to help him on his way. Very quickly in the story we find out that MC is a real adventure types and wants to see the whole world he is in now. While also having Magik powers starting him as a warg mage. And a real seafarer.

So far so good, hope for more,not really enough to really go on but not disappointed.

I'll be honest: the premise of this fanfic is good, but the overall story is bad. It almost feels like an AI wrote the entire thing. I wouldn't mind if the AI was good, but as I read, it uses so many unnecessary words that make me wonder if there was any human touch at all. Every word is predictable, and there is too much unnecessary detail. Sometimes, the author (or the AI) repeats themselves, which is frustrating. And now, they want us to pay to read AI-written work.

Me encantó la novela. Espero que continúes con la novela y la actualices rápido. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................

i think the novel is good for now and maybe it will only need time and more chapter to get betteri dont mind the harem in ancient times having a harem was very ordinary i hope the novel will have more chapter

plz update your one-piece fanfic its awesome.

Хорошое произведение, мне понравилось. Развитие сюжета на 5/5. Текст тоже хорошое 5/5. Система тоже нормальное, может козатся слишком ИМ, но только на первый взгляд 4/5.

Bastante bien. El sistema está bastante bien. Y la idea es interésante. Pero los primeros 20 capítulos son algo lentos. El protagonista tiene una personalidad rara.... Te cae bien en algunos capítulos y en otros no mucho.

Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?

Well, it is a nice and enjoyable reading for me. I love it very much so far. And I wish you best of luck to continue your wonderful work. Thanks. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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