Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
3 years ago
19
Nicolas_Bahamondes
looks like chinese fiction
a system that gives away powers that completely destroy one piece's power levels umedo dreams of the girls he meets with no real goal other than being the typical person with the largest member
2 years ago
6
ysg
I really enjoy this fanfic, I love my fair share of op protagonists. The author clearly knows what they're doing with how the story is fleshing out and they clearly know one piece from what I've seen so far. No grammar or punctuation mistakes so far, but I could be wrong I'm not adept in the english language. Stability of updates is perfect there is no need for more or less than one chapter a day. Well I can't say much about story development so far but I hope it goes well and it's practically the same with world background. Overall, good job author keep doing good work and i'll continue to support this story.
3 years ago
3
MagicianMiracle
I must say so far this fanfic is very good when it comes to a op mc(he doesnt buy the op skills because he know it would grt boring so he trains for them or gets them by a mission)and the updating is good so far I just hope the author isn't like other authors that drops the story when it gets to chapter 40-100. if u do want to drop it just speed run the story tbh better to end it then to never update it.
3 years ago
2
longchicken888
I love It. hope you don‘t drop this amazing art.
3 years ago
2
FiLL88
ff could be called wet dreams .. harems , OP forces , other worlds , the system ... perhaps the 1st power of a speedster with khaki would be enough to unwind the whole piece
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
looks like chinese fiction a system that gives away powers that completely destroy one piece's power levels umedo dreams of the girls he meets with no real goal other than being the typical person with the largest member
I really enjoy this fanfic, I love my fair share of op protagonists. The author clearly knows what they're doing with how the story is fleshing out and they clearly know one piece from what I've seen so far. No grammar or punctuation mistakes so far, but I could be wrong I'm not adept in the english language. Stability of updates is perfect there is no need for more or less than one chapter a day. Well I can't say much about story development so far but I hope it goes well and it's practically the same with world background. Overall, good job author keep doing good work and i'll continue to support this story.
I must say so far this fanfic is very good when it comes to a op mc(he doesnt buy the op skills because he know it would grt boring so he trains for them or gets them by a mission)and the updating is good so far I just hope the author isn't like other authors that drops the story when it gets to chapter 40-100. if u do want to drop it just speed run the story tbh better to end it then to never update it.
I love It. hope you don‘t drop this amazing art.
ff could be called wet dreams .. harems , OP forces , other worlds , the system ... perhaps the 1st power of a speedster with khaki would be enough to unwind the whole piece
Put more Chapter ++++++
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