Dude, you should do more research on abilities, Escanor's grace Sunshine let's him harness energy from sun not day. The reason Escanor becomes weak at night because Sunshine is the ability of Mael a goddess clan member and Escanor's mortal body cannot handle it. At night Sunshine user is at his weakest form means he has no buff from the ability and is at his base power. MC in your fic is not a mortal human but Asgardian, at night his strength should be what a normal Asgardian would have(if he never trained in his life to get stronger and only relies on his sunshine ability, which in my opinion is pathetic).
Other than this diffence in opinion with MC's ability. This fic is great👍.
2 years ago
56
PsyLoRD
Great idea but poorly executed.
2 years ago
35
Sorrias
Honestly? Pretty good, I'm surprised someone on this App actually knows the difference between past, present and future.
2 years ago
11
BigBud
Pretty good, I just feel like the author doesn’t accurately depict Escanor and his abilities. It feels more like an Asguardian god of the sun than Escanor.
its not bad the author is definitely iffy when it comes to Escanor's powers that's for sure. But not the worse fanfic I've ever read.
2 years ago
1
GENGHIS_KHAN
Very nice so far. Pls don’t drop. Did you take inspiration from fff-class trans hero for the system type thing with the gods. Djjdmcmmckdmdmdmmdmdmdmdmdm
2 years ago
1
SinnersLaw
meh I liked it it's just something to read when you are bored tbh
2 years ago
0
Psym
I like it very much.
Though the update is really slow.
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2 years ago
0
fachlock
La idea del fanfic me parece interesante le daré una oportunidad aunque los capítulos son demasiado cortos.......................................................................................................................
Dude, you should do more research on abilities, Escanor's grace Sunshine let's him harness energy from sun not day. The reason Escanor becomes weak at night because Sunshine is the ability of Mael a goddess clan member and Escanor's mortal body cannot handle it. At night Sunshine user is at his weakest form means he has no buff from the ability and is at his base power. MC in your fic is not a mortal human but Asgardian, at night his strength should be what a normal Asgardian would have(if he never trained in his life to get stronger and only relies on his sunshine ability, which in my opinion is pathetic). Other than this diffence in opinion with MC's ability. This fic is great👍.
Great idea but poorly executed.
Honestly? Pretty good, I'm surprised someone on this App actually knows the difference between past, present and future.
Pretty good, I just feel like the author doesn’t accurately depict Escanor and his abilities. It feels more like an Asguardian god of the sun than Escanor.
Interesting topic 👏 👌 🤔 👍 😏 😀 😀 👏 👌 **************************??*?*******************************************************
its not bad the author is definitely iffy when it comes to Escanor's powers that's for sure. But not the worse fanfic I've ever read.
Very nice so far. Pls don’t drop. Did you take inspiration from fff-class trans hero for the system type thing with the gods. Djjdmcmmckdmdmdmmdmdmdmdmdm
meh I liked it it's just something to read when you are bored tbh
I like it very much. Though the update is really slow. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
La idea del fanfic me parece interesante le daré una oportunidad aunque los capítulos son demasiado cortos.......................................................................................................................