In Twilight

Very good crack fic just what I needed. More chaps pls.

This is a hilarious fanfic I was a expecting a run of the mill twilight fanfic but this is gold i have laughed more times then I can count and have enjoyed everything so far. So thank you for bring me enjoyment in this dull world.

Well let me say this, love the Mc’s personality. Only problem I have with this story is that the Mc’s name is quite literally Bob. Other then that it’s pretty good.

It is but a flesh wound

I just don’t like this at all. It’s barely readable. I don’t even know how to explain how bad it is

The story is alright, it obviously does the job that it's written for and I can respect that, but a part of me feels like it's a way too cringey to read. In say...a fictional cartoon/anime, maybe you can get away with that crack behavior, but in a 'realistic world' setting, whatever it's worth, this guy should have gotten punched more than a few times on principle. Or killed. Or you know, be part of a deranged family of psychopaths. In short, I'll admit that the story is good for what it is, but it's not something I'm willing to add to my collection or continue reading. Keep it up though.

I’v read quite a few crack fics but this may just be my favourite. It’s absolutely hilarious and Bob might just be my favourite character in fiction.

I'd say ...... go read it & have the best laugh 😂 of your poor life.... you peasants . mc words 😂 not mine... !!!👍

I came in with 0 expectations, and I found gold. How did someone not recommend this to me before? Man, the MC might be delusional, but he's so much fun hahahaha, I look forward to more chapters. If I open a patreon, I will definitely go to support, umu.

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Alredy wrote a 5 stars review but this deserved 10 stars so here i am

You, sir, are an excellent storyteller. But, unfortunately, I've discovered that my mind cannot accept this type of writing, which some of you may refer to as crack-fic, so this is where I depart. XOXO

more plz .................................................................................................................................................................