A fast-paced Short novel
Natasha has been Erik's assistant for as long as anyone can remember, faithfully carrying out his every whim and command. From being his live model to running Carnal, scheduling his routine and even getting his coffee, she has been his right hand. However, as the night settles, she takes on a more sinister role. She becomes his scouter, his hunter, and his protector as they search for a pure soul to reclaim his throne.
While it is understandable that Erik is in search of a pure soul, one has to question the morality of such an endeavor. He is willing to do whatever it takes to reclaim the throne, even if it means putting Natasha in a dangerous position. Furthermore, this endeavor will likely open up old wounds, secrets, and the mystery of what Natasha is.
Disclaimer
This is a rewrite of an old novel I wrote two years ago.
The author has done a great job of keeping the reader engaged by creating a vivid and imaginative setting in the beginning and then shifting the focus to a completely different scenario, keeping the reader on their toes. The ending of the chapters leaves the reader with a feeling of surprise and possibly even a desire for more. I have added this story into my collection and eagerly waiting for the update <3 just a suggestion which i have given in the first chapter. Keep up the good work author!
There just a few typos here and there but what I have read so far is fantastic. It's fast paced and thrilling. This book's potential is crazy. I love it.
The book has unlimited potential. Keep updating
very well written. I just have one very small gripe with the paragraphing and the dialogue. Like I said in chapter 1 comments, the dialogue not being its own paragraph just made it harder to read. Other than that, its a good read.
The quality of the book is excellent. There are no mistakes that can make you dislike or dislike readers. The world-building is very good The update is stable and stable. It is a book worth your time to read. I recommend it.
Interesting read! The idea of this story is kind of unique too, I like it! But there are several mistakes in pronunciation that could be confusing. I think you need to proofread this novel.
It's a good book, but there were errors. It'd be better if you can take care of the errors in the book.
Good start! This intriguing synopsis of Natasha's transformation from a faithful assistant to a sinister accomplice is ripe with potential for a thrilling and thought-provoking story. The author's ability to create a character with such complexity in such a short description is impressive, and an update to further explore Natasha's motivations and actions would be eagerly anticipated by readers.