My Upgrades are Invincible. Rewrite

It's a rewrite from a good author who has gotten better

Eh overall i kinda prefer the original. Yeah it was kinda ridiclous but since it already set up such a ridiculous start, it was always expected that it wasn't going to turn completely serious. Here while i do like that he joined the Hephaestus Familia, the info drop that this was set years prior to the start of canon was a little jarring as it never felt that it was set in the past. Besides that, the ocs aren' t really clicking i mean we have Tina(i think that was her name was) is just an oc version of pretty much Liliruka.Yeah sure the original wasn't perfect and had a lot of changes to canon but it was pretty much consistent. Overall, i kinda miss the original one.

can't wait for more chapters, the original was really good, and this is a rewrite with a different starting point. even the MC ability is slightly different than the original, which is good cause then we know that this isn't a copy an paste fan fiction.

really like the fanfic and how it's put in the 'golden' era of adventuring.plus I really appreciate the OCs

really good writing of the characters and conversations, doesn't at all feel like a robot talking or it's too much cringe that you can't even look at it. overall this story is a really good read.

50 capitulos en un año, dejame decir que estoy decepcionado, pero encontrar una historia divertida y genial, que no abusa de etiqueta como "Tragedias" y "traición" es difícil hoy en día, me preguntó que les pasa a esos autores? Tienen problemas en casa? Mi opinión es que está historia es genial, te lo pierdes si no la lees, buena gramática y agradables diálogos, el mc de este autor es generalmente OP, no le halló ningún problema, en fin, bueno provecho.

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Are you going to continue this I really enjoy it?

aza man, you can delete books now! now all the books you dropped that quite literally, hit the leaderboard every single time can be cleaned up!

a great novel but random update times...

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the only redeeming point about this novel is the character personalities which are well built. however the whole other bunch of the story is a slightly fiasco: no detailed world context, no clear power progression, dumb protagonist decisions couldve been a masterpiece, though i guess the author does not seek serious storytelling, but rather a kind of simple minded fic

Este es uno, o quizás el mejor fanfiction de dannachi que e visto. El único que está a la par, es irónicamente el otro que creo el mismo autor y que incluso comparte el nombre del protagonista.