MARVEL: Loki, the Frozen Fruit Ability
Author: typicalanimewatchr
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「MTL/Machine Translated Chinese fanfic that is good」「Other Name: American Comics: Under Loki, The Frozen Fruit Ability」
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What's up with Loki?
Travel across the world of American Comics to be reborn as Odin's adopted son, Loki, god of trickery with the blood of a frost titan.
I originally planned to be a rich second generation honestly, not to do anything but to die.
But the system rewards are too tempting...
"Frozen fruit Frost Titan bloodline, just started, labor and capital are invincible?!"
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Good Chinese MTL Novel that's why I uploaded it here. Fast Paced with intriguing plot. Loki x Sif with two daughters who now staying on Earth.
THIS IS MACHINE TRANSLATION [MTL] AS MENTIONED IN SYNOPSIS. NOT EDITED. NOT A TRANSLATOR. MC IS LOKI - FAST PACED - ACTION - WHOLESOME. PLEASE LEAVE A REIVEW AFTER READING THIS NOVEL IF YOU ENOJYED IT.
Why is it that MTL Chinese superhero fanfic have interesting premises but the writing quality is terrible with names being butchered a lot…
[Loki, King of Johtunheim] Completing Missions - Fast Paced. Good relationship with Kamar Taj and Ancient One is kind of a disciple. Magic R&D always going on but not in the later chapters. All in all, RECOMMENDED ❄
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Bruh chinese writers don’t have imagination i’ve seen hundreds of fanfics and they all have the same system, same cliche and the characters name changes in every paragraph,MC power hungry never satisfied and he wants every anime power in existenc.
Ever heard of giving Hulk a steel sword this what I thought after reading this title. Whatever you say I don't think any fruit can surpass casket of ancient winters.
0 butterflies which makes this story extremely boring. Just change Loki a bit, give him OP system, then watch him do nothing but get married, have kids, and have his kids do things which don't change the timeline at all. Every storyline from MCU happens, nothing is butterflied away even though it should be. Makes story extremely episodic and boring to read. Though from a Loki standpoint, the only butterfly he cares about is Thanos and thus the only things that might change are related to him, but since you have to read hundreds of chapters of things you already know the original ending to, it is a boring read.
From what I can understand it's a good story I've only been like the first 10 chapters but the grammar was so bad and it was really hard to understand sometimes and he jumped from paragraph and made no sense overall it was terrible but the story did have promise all of you have to do is fix all the grammatical errors.
Nice one.Can anybody provide the link for original please.
Could have been a nice read, unfortunately I really couldn't enjoy reading a MTL fanfic. At chapter 8 I stopped as I was starting to have an headache, why can't the person who published this fanfic here do some editing??
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Not gonna lie am reading this because you're a good translator
Holy shit it’s unreadable. Tried to get through the first two chapters but couldn’t. The translation is absolute garbage.
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